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for Things Never Meant to Be

by theMaven

person stella
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww, the suspense is killing me. i want more. please update soon.
person Feminafures
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You update so quickly...lol. m mam making me reviewing rounds today and I already see 4 new chapters. But your story flows smoothly and is a pleasure to read, so no complaints from this girl!

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the rest of your chapters.

Ja ne,
Gia
person crystal
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please oh please update, don't just leave me hanging
person shaid
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It gets better with every chapter and I can't wait to read more. I love any Rin/Sesshomaru pairing, almost more than a Kagome/Inuyasha Pairing. Almost. The pairing is interesting because there is a severe gap in perspectietweetween Sessh and Rin and it can be a huge barrier. There is also sometimes a lack of communication and understanding that can be deadly to a relationship, but when overcome can make it all that much more special.

Please post more! I'm very excited to read this!
person Jace
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is a Very good story you have here... I am looking forward to seeing what you have planned for it next. Who is the one who saved her? Was it Inu or Sesshoumaru? Prolly the latter, I have a feeling that he has been following her around just one step behind her the whole way, making sure that she is doing ok but not letting her know that he is there.
Pleeeeease continue soon....

-(Jacie)-
person Shadiyaray
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I was right. I ly dly do love this story! I am a big Sess and Rin fan all the way!
I was trembling when he looked in her eyes and held her chin with his hand. Awww! How sweet.
person youkai tsuki
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well well, look who snuck in while my back was turned, theMaven
only one of my favorite writers. You cannot just post this story, you
must post the others. They compliment each other and the site would
not be complete without them. I am still waiting for my update, you
know which story I am referring to but I am patient. I await your updates
and e yoe you with a hearty Welcome and thank you for sharing your
wonderful stories with the masses. Happy writing and I will see you in
the reviews.


youkai tsuki
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my oh my you just can't stope like that . it just not right. your story iry gry good and i like them alot.
person ApriL
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm...update soon please
person Pallas
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good!! I like the way this is going... But is Rin going to show them all she can make it without Sesshoumaru? What I mean is, since he has obviously resqued her, she will come back with him to his castle... She said herself she would do everything to get back in his good graces; what if she tried everything, and nothing works? It would destroy her... I hope she will get some self-worth and confidence, because she can very much use them!! I really like this story very much so don't you dare stop here!^_^