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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keke, i had my doubts at first.. since i'm not a big rin/sess supporter ^^;;; but this story was definitly interesting! hmm sort of makes me think of that pairing a little differently
great job with this fic! i hope to read more of your stories
great job with this fic! i hope to read more of your stories
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really, really liked this. It was very well written and you played the story just right so that the final chapter was a reward well earned. I'm not saying the other chapter sucked, by any means, they were wonderful, they built up to the end quite nicely, dragging me along with the flow of words. If this story was a car and I was being towed behind it, I would have run to catch up, even if I'd been unconcious. Bravo, I should like to read some more of your works. =3
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! that was so short! I need more... Was he actually trying to seduce her there? Cause that was damn cool... More!? Please? Or I'm going to have to start working on my own fic again and belive me, I'm not doing my idea justice...
But this... This is good. But you need to give me more... MORE I TELL YOU!!!
::goes cackeling off to her own, poorly writen fic...::
But this... This is good. But you need to give me more... MORE I TELL YOU!!!
::goes cackeling off to her own, poorly writen fic...::
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first chapter and I loved it. I love how you keep Sesshoumaru in character. So perfect. And Rin is so sweet. She has still retained that childlike innocence about her even though she is older. Nice beginning, now, I will continue on.
Scarecrow
Scarecrow
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks again for updating so soon. The last two chapters were wonderfully done! I will definitely look to mediaminer and fanfiction.net to read your other works. In the mean time I'll anxiously await the sequel to this fanfic.
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating so soon! I just loved the new chapters and you transitioned Rin from child to adult. (Also on a more personal note I wanted to say thanks for thanking me in your A/N. I totally made my week!!) I'll be keeping my eye out on new chapters and please let me and your other fans know if you post stories on other websites. Keep up the great work!
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending.
Shadiyaray
Shadiyaray
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the last two chaps. They were most enjoyed. The love scene was perfect for this story. I was like staring at the screen hooked on every word. simply sweet and tastefully done. I am looking forward to the sequel.
Ras~~~
Ras~~~
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hurry add more oh by the way demons dont marry they mate
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG you are soooooooo evil!!!! How could you leave such a cliffy?!?!?!?!!?!?!?! This story is awesome i love it, you have me totally hooked!!!!!! I can't wait until you post more!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more and update ASAP!!!!!