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for The Transformation

by Atropa

schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was good, but i want to know what happens next? after all they still have to go back home and ddeal with things there. shippo has no clothes, most of rin's were torn, and it would be obvious to the demon papa's noses what their kids have been doing.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was great, however i would like to have kagome, inuyasha, sango, and especially sesshoumaru's reactions.
person penpaninu
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute pairing!! Oh shippou is so cute as a grown youkai (grins) He got Rin, lucky fox!
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good
person SerenityFox
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a cute Rin/Shippou story! *hugs* It's so adorable!
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute. i like it.
person Goeleven
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was actually pretty good please write a sequal.
person vampmistress76
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this was so sweet! And well done. I'm impressed! So far I like all of the fics I've read and would like to make a request if possible? Would you mind writing a Kurama/Keiko fic for me? There are so few of them out there and I love the way you wrote Kurama in 'Boundaries'. Do you think it would be possible to do that? Email me if you don't mind cause I'd love to hear from you. Thanks!

Rose aka vampmistress76
person richonyx
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I hate Sess/Rin pairings--they seem too incestuous. But Shippou/Rin makes perfect sense, and you were masterful in explaining his "growth spurt" and their mating. It was so kawaii! Keep on writing!
person inuyasha_m8
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please make a sequal or more chapters or something.please.great story.