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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
T-T *crying into her hands*
ohhh I hope kouga hurries it up and reassures ayame that he loves her!!!
ohhh I hope kouga hurries it up and reassures ayame that he loves her!!!
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O
OMK (Oh my Kam Mor Mortal Kombat if I'm in a silly mood)!.... *Sniffles* Poor Ayame!.... *cries* Damn that Naraku! That's....that's so sad.... *whimpers and then bawls*
Chibodee: It's just a fic Bonnie, calm down....
NUUU!!! That was sad! Good, but sad! I'm almost freakin' crying here! And you said it "could've been better"! Please, quit underestimating your writing abilities! This is great! Well not great that Ayame lost her pups, but you know what I mean. ^.^;;
Can't wait to read chappie 12 when you have it finished! ^.^ Ja ne!
P.S. Thanks for the review again!
OMK (Oh my Kam Mor Mortal Kombat if I'm in a silly mood)!.... *Sniffles* Poor Ayame!.... *cries* Damn that Naraku! That's....that's so sad.... *whimpers and then bawls*
Chibodee: It's just a fic Bonnie, calm down....
NUUU!!! That was sad! Good, but sad! I'm almost freakin' crying here! And you said it "could've been better"! Please, quit underestimating your writing abilities! This is great! Well not great that Ayame lost her pups, but you know what I mean. ^.^;;
Can't wait to read chappie 12 when you have it finished! ^.^ Ja ne!
P.S. Thanks for the review again!
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*TEARFUL* NARAKU YOU EVIL BASTARD! KILLLL KILL KILL!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. Ayame, Hakkaku and Ginta are some good characters, and so few people use them. I'm only up to chapter 6 right now, but the only thing I dislike at all is... the smirking! I know Kouga's a cocky bastard and all, but he's doing it 18 times in chapter 6! Now, I'm no expert on female psycology, but it seems to me that even if Kouga is sexier than a cross between Mel Gibson and Sean Connery, he'd better show a bit more humility before he gets a knee in the groin. o_O
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, i guess now we know why your penname is sorrowfulayame. that frickin' bastard!! i really really hope that he gets castrated sloooowwwlllllyyyy for this. poor poor ayame. i mean, now their whole relationship is built on lies, nothing that happened was really of their own violition. and now miscarriage? ::winces:: that really is terrible. angst coming out the watoozy....
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww...so sad.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol...love the little part at the end of this chapter.
"Kouga, you can't expect to just sweat talk me everytime we get into a fight. That won't work on me." She said firmly as he smirked devilously and whispered in her pointed ear. Moments later she blushed furiously and swatted his arm.
"NO! won won't work either!" Ayame cried as Inuyasha's ears twitched.
Overall great chapter, update soon.
"Kouga, you can't expect to just sweat talk me everytime we get into a fight. That won't work on me." She said firmly as he smirked devilously and whispered in her pointed ear. Moments later she blushed furiously and swatted his arm.
"NO! won won't work either!" Ayame cried as Inuyasha's ears twitched.
Overall great chapter, update soon.
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD ahhh i love kouga/ayame! this chapter was fun! more please1
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 9 and 10 abs absolutely adorable and very funny!! Poor Kouga, he takes so much abuse, even if he does deserve it at times!
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FANFIC SOOOO MUUUUCH!!!!
I'm a huuuge kouga/ayame fan and this fic is sooo well written! Finally kouga sees ayame is WAYY better than kagome! Kagome really is no fun in my opinion =_= dun like her at all!
I hope you update sooooon *nudge nudge nudge*
Kouga is being sucha posessive asshole though =_= oh well i'll just chalk that up to hormones and his lack of control during mg seg season ^^;;;
I'm a huuuge kouga/ayame fan and this fic is sooo well written! Finally kouga sees ayame is WAYY better than kagome! Kagome really is no fun in my opinion =_= dun like her at all!
I hope you update sooooon *nudge nudge nudge*
Kouga is being sucha posessive asshole though =_= oh well i'll just chalk that up to hormones and his lack of control during mg seg season ^^;;;