rate_review Reviews

Very nice. I'm usually not very big on Kouga/Ayame fics, but this one takes the cake. Great job.

Good job! its hard to find ayame/kouga stuff... >.< Only one thing that bothers me though... What hapd tod to the pup that Kouga found?! O.o;;;;

I know who you are now... You were someone who use to roleplay on GreatestJournal with PrettyKagome right? I thought so... I love this story by the way, it's awesome... and the first Kouga/Ayame fiction I read. Then I read others like march winds etc. But yes. :)

I commend your efforts. The story was well thought out and reasonably well-written. You do need a little work with punctuation, and I'd advise you to ease up on the usage of the word "bitch," as it is generally considered bad writing to use a word more than three times per paragraph. Otherwise, this was a great story.

Bad, bad, bad you Ayame-sama! You didn't tell me that you updated! *whack lightly on head with katana sheath*

Now anyway, onto the review!

OMFK! That was so good! I nearly cried reading the conversation between Kouga and Ayame. It was so sad yet sweet at the same time. The arguments between Kouga/Miroku and Kouga/Sango were priceless though. I could just see that happening. This is such a great fic, and I can't wait for the next fantastic chappie that I know you're going to write! Really, it's good. I wouldn't change a thing. And, heh, don't worry, I'll email what I have written on chappie three tonight so you can help me.

Well, I guess that's it. I'll talk to you later then! Ja ne!

Oh yeah, I think I'm going to go change my pen name on here... I don't like this one too much, lol. It was Joe's idea. That's all I can say. Lol. That should explain it. Well, bye!~Bon~Bonnie

(For Ch 13) Fantastic! I especially loved the part where Kouga took his cocky ass to the stream and got whacked by Sango LMAO!!! That was priceless!

oh, that was horrible but wonderful at the same time. please tell me though that in the next couple of chapters you'll go through the depression process for kouga and ayame or that time will pass. i don't think that the next day should come nad they sdhould be back to f***ing like bunnies (wouldn't kouga be pissed about that analogy? hehe!) now i'm curious as to what i wrote that made you laugh. i remember being mad at someone. update soon!

yo! this is spirit with a few complaint and complitments!

compliments first
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now.. i love the story it is very good indeed please update soon

Complaints!
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HOW COULD YOU NOT PUT THESE O FANFICTION.NET YET???????????????????????
thank you now

did you change the name of this fic?
::Wince:: poor ayame. she doesn't deserve this. i mean, no one ever does but her life has sucked so bad and now this? seriously, kuso is right.
now about inuyasha- for that one little line:'females are really emotional about this sort of shit'----
if i had been there, our little asswipe of a hanyou would be getting dragged to the vet to get neutered SO QUICKLY, his ass would sqeauk as it went over the linoleum floors. JACKASS! females get emotional about this sort of shit?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
WHAT THE F*** IS THAT!??!?!?!!?
how about i get really emotional adn stick my foot up his ass, that freakin' fleabag riddden, maturity stunted, mentally challenged and logicallpairpaired piece of three day old rotten hippo shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i mean, COME ON!!! (and yes, i'm still on my 'i-hate-men' phase.) ooooooo, i hope kagome finds out about that last comment and makes him sit so hard, he needs testical retreival surgery. bastard. 'women get emotional......'- yeah, well when he has his little time of the month, whose the biggest whiner in the entire feudal era? and WHO has this obbsession with his stupid sword, showing off how it can grow so big, even when the situation doesn't call for it, all because he's intimidated by something- oh, thats right! mr. 'women are emotional'. ::claps really slowly:: great parlor trick inu. why don't you do that at parties?????
yeah, so i'm being an overreactive bitch right now but if you sorta apply this to my life, you'd get this and see it all makes sense.
this review was sponsered by extreme fustration with the male species.
update soon (even though you might be scared to, seeing as how i rant every time you have a new chapter. sorry about that.....)

so sad..poor Ayame.. :(