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for Purple Petals

by Whitewolfayame

person clear flower
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg u gotta update soon!!!!!!! plz plz plz plz
person Rawben
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good story/chapter!! i like how you pulled that out! lol... although i think it would have been more believeable if she had been just "spotting" and not having blood running down her thigh... but it's ok! i'm glad it's working out!!!!

also: i love how you wrote that part where miroku grabbed her and she knocked him several feet away! i was crackin up!

yey for updates!!!
person Purple Skye
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon please. and why do you not update this story on Fanfiction.net anylonger?
person Spirit demon
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOpe Ya UPDatE SoOn
person sterlingwings900
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! THEY'RE STILL ALIVE! yes, NOW THEY CAN HAVE THEIR PUPS! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! YOU MUST WRITE IT NOW!
person Robert Hobbs III
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In reply to the last chapter, actually it is possible to to bleed like that and still retain the baby. Somthing similar happened to my sister where she started bleeding but she kept the baby. that baby is now 7 years old It's a very risky thing, but it is possible.
person AnjelRocker (not logged in)
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! She didn't have a miscarriage. -dances- Great work Lilz! Update soon. :D
person Skye
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome baby... Im so glad that you didnt kill off the pups... I almost cried when you told me what you did to them at first! Well writen, and a nice sized chapter at that. Keep up the good work baby! Love you!

~Skye
person Takai no Tenshi (not logged in)
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* OMG.......

*stares in awe*

HER PUPPIES MIGHT BE ALIVE??????

WOOT! ^__^ *cheers for joy*

Ephiny: *wipes at her eyes briefly, her lips curled up in a faint smile* Thank the gods...Ayame-sama and Kouga-sama's pups are still okay...

Me: Well, actually, they only MI--

Takkun: *glares evilly*

Me: ^_^;; Yeah, isn't it great?
person sterlingwings900
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh! this is so awesome! i just started recently reading ayamexkouga pairings and by far this is the best! lemons and waffiness! what a great combination! you have a nice writing style! while its cute and lemony, theres angst in it too! keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON! man, i cant wait for the next chapter! DAMN NARAKU AND DAMN ALL OF HIS FILTHY NO GOOD FUCKING LIES! I HOPE HE DIES AND ROTS IN HELL WHERE HE BELONGS! okay, bye!