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for Kirara's secret

by Atropa

person Lord D
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have read alomst all your stories and i have to say This one is in the top but i still like your longer Sango stories the best. My be try a sango/Kirara that might be interesting.
person Louk
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please write a sequel! I want to know what happens between Inuyasha and Kirara next, please?! And also if Sango finds out before Kirara can tell her.
person xXx
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, you should write some more Inuyasha/Kirara stories.
person Blue
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was an amazing story... lots of imagination... i congratulate you! keep up the good work...
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Just like all of your fics. Wonderful. I don't even have to say keep up the good work. It apparently comes naturally for you.
person janomaru
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is this story complete because i want to know what happens next
person Mr.Manson
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I love it all.
person janomaru
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic you should continue the idea
i'd like to see this fic eventually become like 20-27+ chapters
person plainandsimplegirls
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story would be very, very good if it were'nt for the length of it. Chapter are too short to be considered chapters
person Inu_shommaru
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn......that was one hell of a fic.,gives u a warm fuzzy feeling, gets u hard or wet and makes u experience the miracle of life in 17 chapters.I thank you for writing this phenomanol fic.Never have i seen an Inu/Kir fic. done so well, een though ive only read three, i have to agree with u on the "how do YOU do it" thing we both do it daydream and use ur memories that is.
I love this fic though i can not stres that enouph......I also have a challenge for u,its a Inu-shommaru(inuyasha uses jewel or something ;ile that to permanatly fuse w/ sessy)/kirara.heres the summery:Inu lost control and went full demon against naraku, then he missed naraku and slashed kags severly.After nar's defeat the Inu-tatchi with exception of kirara and one other person (not kags,anybody besides her is your choice)deems inu untrustible and hostile, kags gives him the jewel and he (you choose what he does and wishes for,find a way for kirara to transform into humanoid form to dont care how but try k)inu, kir,and??? go and learn that nar was just a puppet in some greater evil's plot.Inu and Kir mate and sometime later have have kippies(kittens/puppies hehe)(btw inu-shommaru is 2 be the 2nd strongest demon in existence)Time goes by the former inu-tachi now called ther miko/slayer-tachi becomes enimies,more enimies ae made by the new inu tachi and new allys are made to.more time goes by more kiooies are made as well as other children/cubs/calfs etc. finally the main evil is destroyed blah blah blah.ore you can alter everything to ur liking except(these parts in here) if u want info on inu-shommaru's looks for this fic e-mail me,im currently working on a rough draft for inu-shomaru/ayame pairing called" legend of inu-shommaru:the dog king of the northern wolves(or wherever ayame's territory is) please consider this challnge