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among the world a great tournament is hold ,with the unique purpose blend/mate the most strongest . this year the tounament is held to win the son of the lord of the western lands LORD SESSHOmaru , but wath happens when the lord do not to to be the honor one , meanwhile the most strongest femele prepare themselves towin the lord (demons and humans) a young human namen rin venture to the tornamen by his father orther , how could rin's meeting alter the whole tornament.

It's o.k. so far.....I'll be waiting for the updates to read more......

I usually don't read alternate fics, but this seems like an interesting twist ^_^

It's a good beginning, but I just can't imagine Sess saying "please" to anyone, even in an AU fic. I do want to see Rin kick some ass, though ^__- And be mindful of where you put your quotation ma som sometimes it's tough to tell whether your characters are acting, thinking or speaking aloud. But if you surround all their dialogue with quotation marks, that'lear ear up any confusion.

You're off to a good start--especially with the pairings--now, we just have to wait to see where you'll take us--theMaven :)

good set up chapter, like stories that have some action in them.
liked knowing who every one is right off the bat ,so can get into the story.

i am glad you wrote a sess and rin story! i agree with you that sesshoumaru is hot, but im not quite sure about naraku though. love the idea how naraku and kikyo are paired up! i think they are meant for each other just as much as sess and rin, inu and kag and miroku and sango. don't cha think? hehehehe. well looking forward to your 2nd chapter. update soon!

^__^ i love it Please write more !!