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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ewwww nasty I love lemons but I hate those parings
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good fic ^^
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww how sad, and good for the boys for not going into temtasHis
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT DO U MEAN DO TO EACH OTHER ! THOSE PAIRINGS BETTER NOT BE PERMENT (I THINK I SPELLED THAT WORNG SORRY) BUT WHAT IS UP WITH THESE PAIRING
I/KI
S/K
K/A
AND INUYASHA'STER TER WITH /N (I FORGET INUASHA'S SISTER'S NAME AT THE MIN ^.^)
BUT WHAT IS GOING ON WITH THE PAIRINGS!
I LIKE READING THE STORY AND ALL SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND EXPLAIN YOURSELF(PLEASE)
p.s why does kagome alway say ummm like she's dumd ^.^
I/KI
S/K
K/A
AND INUYASHA'STER TER WITH /N (I FORGET INUASHA'S SISTER'S NAME AT THE MIN ^.^)
BUT WHAT IS GOING ON WITH THE PAIRINGS!
I LIKE READING THE STORY AND ALL SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND EXPLAIN YOURSELF(PLEASE)
p.s why does kagome alway say ummm like she's dumd ^.^
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i thought inu yasha was a human...?
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, Im not one for giving flames, but this is one of the most poorly written stories I have ever read. If your going to write in script form, you could at least write it like a play...and that whole entire scene with Sango and Kagome fingering themselves to a sentence out of your made-up character's mouth was completely out of character. If anything, take some time to go back through the story and elaborate and write in full sentences.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooo nice
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really good but I hope this is a typo: " Kagome screamed out as she arched back, trying not to have an orgasm. Inuyasha still pumping slowly in Sora, leaned over and started to suck on her left nipple, causing it to harden more. "
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo this is nice
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a very interesting story, i can't wait to see the next chapters.