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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What was inuyasha goning to tell her?
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why do I get the feeling that she may be pregnant.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, You continued! Can't wait for more.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have never ever thought of Ayumi and Inu Yasha as a couple. I must say, I am sorry that this is a one shot fic. I would have liked to see this turn into a 4 maybe 5 part story. You know, Inu goes back home, can't stop thinking of heres bes back stalks her a bit, takes her back with him, marks her, she has puppies the end. Oh well, I still think this is a promising story line and you shouls extend it a bit.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never thought I'd 'see' those two together. How original. Hey, how about this once turning this ficlet into a short story. Where Inu can get enough of her, goes looking 4 her , Kagome finds out and freaks Inu slaps her and all is good in the world. That would be sweet. Hope you take my sugesstion. >.-
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happen next? How will she take him being a demon??? From the feudal era????? Tell me......TELL ME!!!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Original fic, I liked it.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue, this was just too good to be a one-shot fic!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DaMn....
wow...you are so creative!! NEVER in my life have I EVER seen that pairing...and I'm actually wondering on more!!
*giggle* Good job...keep those inventive one-shots coming!!
adios,
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wow...you are so creative!! NEVER in my life have I EVER seen that pairing...and I'm actually wondering on more!!
*giggle* Good job...keep those inventive one-shots coming!!
adios,
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