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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far so good as long as Inuyasha dosn't scew up.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good so far. update soon..
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You aren't updating fast enough! *cracks whip*
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK!! Must . . . have . . . moooooooore!!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey makea new chappie so we can c how Iy gets Kag preg!
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch. Called him a heart-less half-breed. Inuyasha will remember that for quite a while.
Okay, the chapter was very short (but I'm guilty of that at times) and you do havee pre problems. When you mean something in someone's posession, it is spelled your. If you mean to say you are, it's you're. To change that is very annoying. There are other grammer mistakes as well... and even if this turns into a good plot-driven story, many people won't wade through the mistakes for what's good. That's my experience. Good luck with future chapters!
Okay, the chapter was very short (but I'm guilty of that at times) and you do havee pre problems. When you mean something in someone's posession, it is spelled your. If you mean to say you are, it's you're. To change that is very annoying. There are other grammer mistakes as well... and even if this turns into a good plot-driven story, many people won't wade through the mistakes for what's good. That's my experience. Good luck with future chapters!
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so mean what Inuyasha said to kagome. Please write more its good.