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Oh that's it?? :( ..........................
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

Your such an awsome writer. so, kikiyo can't have kids can she? That sucks. She not a very good wife if she can't even talk to her husband abou. W. Well please continue the story. It was a truely wonderful beggining and I kept wondering about what is going to happen next.

hey, what a good start! i like this story a lot. keep up the great work. now, im not a big fan of kikyo......if she would have died i would probably have had a party. mean, yes, but she ticks me off. im looking forward to inu/kag and sess/rin lovin'. sigh...im conflicted. i hate adultery -- it's just horrible, but im willing to make an exception cause its kikyo and who wouldnt want inuyasha?!?! anyways, have fun writing!

Oh that was so good so far. Please updata soon please hurry.

This is one hell of a story you've got here and I really can't wait for more!

Girl, I was wondering when you were going to get off your lazy ass and post here. Hehe I am so telling your cousin that you decided to be a pervert, lol. Anyways good first chapter, I am looking forward to more. And well you should put FF2L on this site too, whatcha get for that one 1300 reviews on ff.net? Maybe peeps here would like to read it too, I dunno just a thought. Ok well update this story like now and I will bepy! py! Lots of love, girl.

Your Friend,
~Videl loves goKU