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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh crap! god, incredible chapter. Very exciting and full of evil cliffies. I loved it. More soon please.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU....HOW?! Having Sesshomaru call Rin a slut and whore.... even if he did do it because he loves her, and wanted to protection her. NO!!!!!!!!!!!.......but, with all that aside....GREAT STORY, I LOVE IT MORE AND MORE EVERYTIME I READ IT.............please tell me things will working out.......UPDATE SOON............
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are evil.
how lond will downdownwardsspiral continue?
how lond will downdownwardsspiral continue?
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa, intense, you really managed to in ain a lot of the character's personalities from the show. Great job. More soon please.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Please update soon!
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon this is a good story
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have a good story with a strong plot and interesting characterizations. And, even though you're not an English major, I'm sure a little proofreading on your part would cut down on the number of spelling and grammar errors. If you know they're there, it should be no problem to fix them. It would make your GOOD story GREAT. So, keep the chapters coming. The more you write, the more you'll improve.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't you just love dinner party?..that's where you get the most dirt on people....It's still very good so far....I can't wait to see what happens next....UPDATE SOON PLEASE.....
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait to read more. Good Job!
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far so good......I love any that has Sess/Rin pairing in it......more chapters please....