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for Rivers of the Heart

by InuyashasPrincess17

person PaolA
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEEEY WHEN ARE YOU PLANING TO REVIEW:D?
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!! wow how great this is going i cant wait to read mooore!
person pia»¨ 
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a story i am totally hoocked? The presentation of feelings is very compelling, i feel for your characters they are well developed. Poor Inuyasha, Kagome and poor Rin, i hope you make Sesshoumaru suffer a little since he was a meany with Rin. I can't wait to read what will happen next. Miroku? Sango? and Kikkyo.... So much suspence and Naraku my favorite!!
Thank you for writing such an engaging story!
person Ayame
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey finally an update, i was really wanting it, see? it wasn't that bad, you didnt take soo long, well, next chapter seems promising, i hope it's as good as it looks!
person Pao
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAAY finally an update!! tht's newwwws...
i loved the stuff about the separation n__n yaay i hope you hurry up and finish the chapies, i'll be waiting for the to arive sooon!!!
person psycho
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon.
person maria
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Rin & Kagome. Sess was such an asshole! And Inu needs to make some decisions about he & Kikyo. I feel bad for Kikyo b/c she went through a lot & none of it was her fault. But I still hope that Inu & Kagome end up together.
person Paola
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i'ts the firs time i've read such a goodry. ry. You are really talented and should keep up whith your writing, Cuz it really is incredible.
Don't be so cruel whith sesshomaru and rin, after all, they make a nice couple, and the inu kag stuff is going really good. I hope you keep up whith this story and not go like some others who just begin them and leave them mid-finished cuz it really is annoying to have to let imagination go, there is no such as the artist's!
Please try to update this week or something like that. I know chapters are really long and costs an effort to write them, but please do writr them, as they are incredible.
person Aime
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think i't soing greeeeaaat!!!!
HEY BUT DONT BE SO LAZY; PICK U?R LAZY ASS UP AND STOP UPDATING EVERY MONTH BUT BETTER MORE ENVERY WEEK:D YAAAYY PLEEEASE I?M EAGER TO READ THIS NEW CHAPPIES!!
person Andrey
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HELLO!!! GOOD GOOD GOOD!!! I CAN?T WAIT TO READ MORE OF THIS STUFF CUZ IT?S GREAT!!!
HEY I DIDN?T LIKE SESSHY SAMA CALLING RIN A WHORE; BUT WHATEVER WHITH THAT; HE'LL LOVE HER IN THE END; WON'T HE???