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Sorry, change favorit to favorite. I hate it when I don't click a key all the way down.

I also forgot to add that I persly tly thought that you did very well with the birth scene. Having gone through it twice, not even I know exactly all the stuff I was feeling. Well, except pain, agony, and confusion as to why I agreed to the whole thing.

Good job again!

I am a huge fan of all of your fanfics, and I really like this one especially. As for your question at the end of chapter 2, I'm very interested in seeing what would happen if Kagome let Shippou suckle her breasts. But, since Shippou is a demon, I think the phallic region would be more...territorially viewed, and as wou would not be something Shippou's mother would've done. That's jmy omy opinion, though. But I'd really be interested in seeing how you portray the suckling relationship. ^-^

I have no problem in kagome using the village way with shippo. I mean if she has to learn about the village why not try it out. I hope that you do put that part in there it would be intersting.

Hi Jeff! Loved the first chap! I really feel for Kagome...I can imagine how awkward she feels with everything being so different than the present,I'd probably feel the same way.
I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the rest of the story.

See you later,
Khell

omg Jeffs as always your stories leave me amazed, they are so well written and very imformative, things I never knew I now have an idea about...thanks a bunch I loved this and hope to read another chap soon..great work as usual keep it up..your awsome at this..huggles and smiles your fan and friend Mi:-) :-)

Wow, thanks for the reminder on what it was like.

Great story. Keep up the good work

i have to that this an intresting look at things back then butkeep up it sounds intresting

ewww, theythey actually do that. I can think of only one world for that, and i hope i'm not wrong, but is this a form of incest. ewwwwwwwww, jeff, i liked your other fic.