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i found it...this is a good story...i learned alot....u should update soon..plz and thankies

i cant help but feel sorry for inuyasha in all your fics. it does seem as though you dislike that character. In this fic, you have sango, an ally of his, threatening to kill him. Im sure inuyasha could have easily gotten out of sango's hold and killed her, but he would not do that to an ally. and in your other fics, you have sess and kag together, not caring about inuyasha. but you can write however u want.

i think thats called molestation (dunno if i spelt it right its 2 late 2 tell) anyways whats with all the mouth twitches stuff?

this was very good i liked it alot and i hope you do a part 3, and i think it would be interesting to do thgat one thing with shipo and kagome.

Once again you've pulled out another wonderful little fic. Great job! Your referencing skills are a wonder! And because of you, I have began researching history and myths for my fics. You inspired me! :P
Anyways, as far as Kagome treating Shippo like the villagers, I think....she would be inclined to allowing him to suckle on her. It's kind of a natural instict with children and mothers and I don't think Kagome would have too much a problem with it considering she treats Shippo as a son anyways. But as far as the rest....Welll......I don't think so. Times have changed and things like that arn't seen very often if at all. Not only that but I think, and this is just my opinion, but demons have their own tradtions apart from humans. Whether this would be of thf them i'm not one to say, but I don't think so. Plus you can blame my western feelings for that too, its just, well, eww. lol
Well however you choose to go, I know it'll be wonderful. Just, you know, if you add that part...could you warn us? lol

Again, great job Jeff.

MysticInca

this turned out really well jeff you did a good job with the birthing part lol and you didnt seem like some dumb guy(lol from me thats a comlpment lol )

as for kagome and shippo altough i for one would love to see you work in to a more historical mother / child reationship between the two, i really dont think that most readers are ready for that though i may be wrong (yes yes i will say it "i am not always right, although i am a woman. " lol )

later

Naheta

Son I'm surprised your asking for permission to have Kagome comfort Shippou the way the village women do. Live dangerously and go for it. We all got to die sometime.
Semper Fidelis
Colonel Thomas B. Golladay jr (Ret)

Wow... very informative, especially since your a dude. I'm ashamed to say you know alot more about it then I do! All I know is that it hurts! lol, anyway... I think Kagome should treat Shippou like she always has been. Only for the simple fact that he's a kitsune (demon). Human and demon probably have different cultures and such. Besides, if she started doing that, Inuyasha might kill the little bugger. We can't have that, now can we?

~V~

I think that it would be delightfully different to read something about Kagome treating Shippou in the manner of the village families. Would be kinda odd for some people i guess, but for others i think it would give them a better feeling of clo close Kagome is to her adopted son, i mean, if she's willing to go to that length to make him comfortable, then she must be a very caring person. (like we all know kagome to be)

Well now jeffs, I can't see Kagome helping shippo to sleep like that. That would take a while I think. But I can see her experimenting with the suckling for comfort... and Inuyasha having a hissy-fit. I will read whatever you decide to throw out as you happen to be a favorit author of mine.