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person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person kitsunechan & TheFireCat
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All i can say to that last guy is "LOL", shippo isn't perverted... much... if at all. but he is very young i guess.

thefirecat/my sister:"yeah lol to you 'youneedhelp'. I'd let shippo nurse from me anytime, he a very nice kitsune. but kagome really is wasting her time with inuyasha, maybe she can get some real attention from shippo even if its just in a motherly way."

and very nice/cute story jeffs
person youneedhelp
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeff or what ever, This is about the most dumbass thing I have every heard of!! I don't care where you got your info. Oh and don't worry I won'y read another chapter!! You should not ask people to review! However, I know a bit about history also! Yes women can create breast milk without having to have had a child and many did this back then to help the children who lost their mothers. BUT, you have crossed the line, because letting others do this at Shippo's age is just wrong and it encourages the wrong attitude towards women! Women are NOT objects of affliction. So, Kagome should have been smacked acrossed the head for even suggesting she do something like this. Inuyasha is right! Shippo should be spanked and he should be left with another family because Kagome IS NOT all he has! Im not a violent person! but in this instant Inuyasha had a right to put both in their places, especially that perverted little Shippo! So, if you want to talk about what took place "back Then" know this, women and children were often punished for silly ass things and this was surely considered silly!!
Man do you have issues and I mean major issues with women!
person Carmella
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must admit this one weas well done, could you perhaps do a sequil were Songo perhaps plays a part or a stroy line were Kogoma figures out its Songo thats been doing it? I like stroies about families and stuff.
person lonelylulaby
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have gotten alot of info on this birthing thing and its really interesting its making me think about how different our lives are now and how much we really do depend on technology and advanced medicines to help us.ja ne till next chapir
person Church
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude can u lik continu further on an put lik somethng that inuyasha had a last straw porsay an lik gets hella angry or scares everybody in fear becuz alot of bad shit happn to him man do somethng for him lik he throws tetsaiga an gets even with everybody (i lik fear stuff ) you kno kicks there ass or soemthng. and when kagomes sits him alot do somethng lik inuyasha wanting to be sat more so that he could die or hes trying to commit suicide an stuff so yeah. i would be very grateful if u did man.
person Jazzy
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so cute . will this go on between Kagome and Shippo
person Zera
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a great way to end the story although i would rather InuYasha more accepting but then again the way you had him in the story is the way he is mostly to act.... are you adding more to this spin off??
person ssj2gohan500
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic

you should have kagome masturbate shippo and also have him join in with inu and kagome for a threesome
person ustukushii
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
P.S. what Kagome is doing is not truly breast feeding, as no feeding is happening. It would be more accurate to call it comfort suckling or something like that.