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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are evil.
I already know that!
don't go to hard on makoto!
migi
I already know that!
don't go to hard on makoto!
migi
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool chapter!! please update soon!!!
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean girlfriend that this fic will start to get dark???!! @_@ I hope that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha will not have
a set back and be enemies again or something will happen to the Inuyasha's or Sess's family? Could a repeat to what has happen to Rin happen
to someone else in the Inu-family. What is it with Sess reacting to Saraku explaination of her cousin timidness and how she
is scared of the headman's son? I hope that you will write a chapter based on Makoto's visit to her uncle. Let Sess experience what
Inuyasha experience with two weeks with Saraku. I enjoyed Saraku, shst ast a spitefire as well as Sesshoumaru's daughter.
Well, I enjoyed the story very much and I hope that you do well on finals and update soon.
a set back and be enemies again or something will happen to the Inuyasha's or Sess's family? Could a repeat to what has happen to Rin happen
to someone else in the Inu-family. What is it with Sess reacting to Saraku explaination of her cousin timidness and how she
is scared of the headman's son? I hope that you will write a chapter based on Makoto's visit to her uncle. Let Sess experience what
Inuyasha experience with two weeks with Saraku. I enjoyed Saraku, shst ast a spitefire as well as Sesshoumaru's daughter.
Well, I enjoyed the story very much and I hope that you do well on finals and update soon.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You just gotta love Saraku; she's a take charge kind of gal :D And InuYasha's a trip and a half, hoping Sess and Saraku will do his dirty work, hehe. But what else can he do?
I'm glad to see we haven't forgotten about the folks at home, too. Sess and Rin have such a different dynamic than Inu and Kag. And how appropriate that Sess has taken in ANOTHER human girl. It's good Saraku will have a playmate. She could only benefit from some more interaction with her peers--human, demon, and hanyou.
Top-notch storytelling--theMaven :)
I'm glad to see we haven't forgotten about the folks at home, too. Sess and Rin have such a different dynamic than Inu and Kag. And how appropriate that Sess has taken in ANOTHER human girl. It's good Saraku will have a playmate. She could only benefit from some more interaction with her peers--human, demon, and hanyou.
Top-notch storytelling--theMaven :)
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's been months since i've even looked at another story to read. And all the ones i thought i would see are replaced with all these new writers, and at least 400 new fanfics just for this anime it seems T_T Guess i have been busy huh? Well, to say the least, a lot of the new stuff i see, if far to mixed up with modern, "american" adventures. Which i would think most people wouldn't want when looking at anything anime. Especially with such things as a Mall in the middle of the country *coughs* Get past that part, and you have to find someone with good writing skills, who can follow characters properly and keep them true to how they were first created by their owners, and yet adapt them to your own story.
That's why i'm happy i found this little story. Nothing to extreme on either side, whether it's pain, sorrow, sexual encounters, which some are just utterly that, and not to much, fairy tale happiness. It's realistic, it's good, well thought out and nicely written. You know how to spell, use grammar, which in fact a lot of people don't do. And even if you have an editor, or a beta reader, that still alone is an accomplishment. Although i doubt i've ever be a normal review, or reader even of your story,muchmuch as i'd like to be, i think you have a good story here. I very rarely find a Sesshoumaru, Rin pairing that is reasonable and made believeable. Others over do it, and yet, you put in the fact that it can be seen as weird as she is introduced in the anime and manga as a child. You don't hide the fact that it could be seen as weird, and in fact you let your characters agree on that fact.
In all, i like it, i could read this one from end to beginning easily, howevere toe to lack of free time i have, i doubt i'll be able to. althought that would be a nice one to have now wouldn't? But nevertheless, i have my writing, and some utterly major and ever so annoying corrections to make. In all, do not write a story you really like, when your in a hurry, without even spell checking it, let alone reading through it before posting it. Or you wind up with a full on trilogy that is a good story, has potential, but is in a utter mess as mine. And to think i'm trying to work on my original work at the same time while handling other matters. *rolles eyes* I love your story though, it sit seems other do. you have quite a nice hit count for as many chapters you have. And hopefully i'll be able to finish reading it someday.
GenesisEve
a.k.a
Lasher
That's why i'm happy i found this little story. Nothing to extreme on either side, whether it's pain, sorrow, sexual encounters, which some are just utterly that, and not to much, fairy tale happiness. It's realistic, it's good, well thought out and nicely written. You know how to spell, use grammar, which in fact a lot of people don't do. And even if you have an editor, or a beta reader, that still alone is an accomplishment. Although i doubt i've ever be a normal review, or reader even of your story,muchmuch as i'd like to be, i think you have a good story here. I very rarely find a Sesshoumaru, Rin pairing that is reasonable and made believeable. Others over do it, and yet, you put in the fact that it can be seen as weird as she is introduced in the anime and manga as a child. You don't hide the fact that it could be seen as weird, and in fact you let your characters agree on that fact.
In all, i like it, i could read this one from end to beginning easily, howevere toe to lack of free time i have, i doubt i'll be able to. althought that would be a nice one to have now wouldn't? But nevertheless, i have my writing, and some utterly major and ever so annoying corrections to make. In all, do not write a story you really like, when your in a hurry, without even spell checking it, let alone reading through it before posting it. Or you wind up with a full on trilogy that is a good story, has potential, but is in a utter mess as mine. And to think i'm trying to work on my original work at the same time while handling other matters. *rolles eyes* I love your story though, it sit seems other do. you have quite a nice hit count for as many chapters you have. And hopefully i'll be able to finish reading it someday.
GenesisEve
a.k.a
Lasher
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked, and I think you did, he has a heart awakened by her, he just tries VERY hard to hide it, I must go read this other story also.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it, see all the interaction with the KIDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOve IR
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT, she will get to play with her cousins!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful, so glad I found this story
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I am a writer and pretty damn good if I say so myself, and I say your story is good, please continue and I will make sure to read and review. No one reviews on this site like they should
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that Saraku has meet her relatives and completely made Inuyasha blood pressure go sky high, when will Inuyasha's
child going to meet Uncle Sess? I think that Sess will take a liking to Makoto because she wieminemind him of his Rin as well
as Sess has a nack for helping young girls who are being threaten. What direction do you want your story to go. I know that
you want to go ahead a few years. I just want to know where you want to lead this story? Update soon.
child going to meet Uncle Sess? I think that Sess will take a liking to Makoto because she wieminemind him of his Rin as well
as Sess has a nack for helping young girls who are being threaten. What direction do you want your story to go. I know that
you want to go ahead a few years. I just want to know where you want to lead this story? Update soon.