rate_review Reviews

This chapter was not bad. I thought it was pretty good my self. I just wished that Saraku find someone who will compatible
to her because her taste in person will be more difficult than her father. It could been seen in Sesshoumaru who was going
to be his mate, Saraku is another story. Please update soon.

that was an awesome chapter. i loved how you had rin confront her demons and share her past the way she did. i can't wait to read more. keep up the good work.

great
not to dark but fine...

I didn't really wonder about Saraku. I expected it.
after all she soesn't mind killing....

good going

migi

great writing, great plot, and yes I knew she would kill him, glad!!!!!!!!

So I'm reading along and loving Rin's recap of her tragic past and the emotions she is going through. And I brighten atry mry mention of Tanshin (feel free to do another story following him and Makato--I love them!). Then we get the villiage and I'm really proud of the way Makato handles things with Muchi. And then, BAM, Sakaru goes "hunting" and the story ends with me totally chilled. Although there have been many deaths and killings in this and the previous story. This one feels the most like a murder. (With the exception of the demons killing Rin of course). And the way she is so pleased with herself is unnerving. I look forward to where you are going with her character.

good chapter. i guessed that saraku was going to kill that ass. i am glad he is dead but somehow i feel as if death really isn't the answer to the problem though. i wonder how she will react to rin's tragic story. she will probably go all crazy or something. hope you will update soon.

I am trying to see Sardestdestiny by killing Muchi. Will she be taking the place of Sesshoumaru by which he failed to do that is
protect not only her immediate family but her extended family as well. Will Saraku be like her father in which kill now and do not
ask questions latter? Update soon.

Great chapter. I liked how Makato regain back her life. Its looks like Makato made her choice in mate without knowing it, because of Rin's explaination
of losing someone you care about when they send you away. I think that was the best punishement for Muchi, but unfortunately Saraku took
full advantage of Muchi punishement. I hope that it will not come back to haunt her when she gets older.
I wonder will Saraku be meeting someone special in her life soon. Then she will understand what Makato and
Tenshin was experiencing when Makato came back home. Update soon.

I can't wait until you post again. That was another great chapter. I can't wait to see how Makoto and Inuyasha deal with what Rin has to say. I feel bad for Sesshoumaru though because he doesn't want his mate to have to go thourgh anymore pain than she already has.

I am sorry I miss the point with Makoto and Muchi. I did not see that Makoto was protecting Tanshin (I think I spell his name wrong) for what Muchin did.
I guess Makoto is like her father in which she will sacifice herself to save the ones she loves. Sess was being overly protective of Rin and for good reason. He
just does not want Rin to revert to her old self when she was scared and frighten of everything. I also believe he so protective because Sess is trying to
protect himself as well becasue Rin did blame him for allowing her to get kidnap and rape. I wonder how Saraku will deal with this news about her mom
when the time comes. Please update soon.