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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.....I don't know who diss your story... scr screw them!!!! Always write for yourself and the loyal fans that follow your work........I love the little facto of life Sesshomaru had with his daughter.....UPDATE SOON
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. I just wished that Sesshoumaru will start to have a closer relationship with his son. I know that can change in time, but
I hope that they will be as close as Sakaru is to him and visa vera for Sarkaru and Rin. As Sar Saraku handling herself at the party. She act with much self-pose as any demon can poses. I am really proud of her and her action. I like the part in the story when Sess was running through his mind that even though his daughter is mostly demon (when it came down to maturity and age), she is developing very quickly like a human (regarding what Rin said to him about Sakaru so will be seeking her independence). I think that he is afriad of this trait becaause that would mean that he will be losing his daughter. I enjoyed very much how Sess reacted to the males at the party eyeing his daughter. Being the protective dad that he is, I wonder if he realize how beautiful his daughter is and why males will be attacted to her. This put Sess in a situation he has never encounter and I like to see how you writ that on your furture chapters. Update soon.
I hope that they will be as close as Sakaru is to him and visa vera for Sarkaru and Rin. As Sar Saraku handling herself at the party. She act with much self-pose as any demon can poses. I am really proud of her and her action. I like the part in the story when Sess was running through his mind that even though his daughter is mostly demon (when it came down to maturity and age), she is developing very quickly like a human (regarding what Rin said to him about Sakaru so will be seeking her independence). I think that he is afriad of this trait becaause that would mean that he will be losing his daughter. I enjoyed very much how Sess reacted to the males at the party eyeing his daughter. Being the protective dad that he is, I wonder if he realize how beautiful his daughter is and why males will be attacted to her. This put Sess in a situation he has never encounter and I like to see how you writ that on your furture chapters. Update soon.
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I guess Inuyasha daughter wedding when with minor interuptions. That Shippo, I would never guess that he
would learn bad habits from Miroku. I thought that Kagome was sheilding him from the monk's perverted behavior. I wonder
will Saraku will leran of her mother's incident with the two demons? How Saraku defend against demons that want to hher her and
her father? Will Saraku will keep her lack of emtion like her father when fighting will be almost certar har have her uncle traits? Update
soon.
would learn bad habits from Miroku. I thought that Kagome was sheilding him from the monk's perverted behavior. I wonder
will Saraku will leran of her mother's incident with the two demons? How Saraku defend against demons that want to hher her and
her father? Will Saraku will keep her lack of emtion like her father when fighting will be almost certar har have her uncle traits? Update
soon.
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whenever you have an updated I either read it immediately, and consequensly end up being late for work or bed, or I wait until I have ample time to delve into the chapter without interruption, meaning I often have to put it off for several days. Whatever the case, discovering an update to this story is always makes for an exciting day.
It is clear you have a good idea of where ystorstory is going as you create chapters. You are flexible enough to integrate new archs as you craft the piece, but you never lose sight of where the story is ultimately going. I'm impressed at howid aid a result you get from writing and posting something in pieces.
I look forward to your next update. Enjoy your vacation!
It is clear you have a good idea of where ystorstory is going as you create chapters. You are flexible enough to integrate new archs as you craft the piece, but you never lose sight of where the story is ultimately going. I'm impressed at howid aid a result you get from writing and posting something in pieces.
I look forward to your next update. Enjoy your vacation!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your stories. I read too many stories that seem to be all the same and rushed. So I thought I would just leave a little review and help towards getting 101 on your reviews I think I should be 100 unless someone review before me while I was think about what to write ^_^
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
forgot what I wanted to say, since site was acting up last night. Oh, that I am glad you took your time and wrote a quality chap. Dislike when authors rush and end up messing up the whole story, it was wonderful as always, and you are quy moy moving into my #1 ff author of all four sites I am on. Excellent. Just wish had such creative writers on SM page. Have a nice vacation
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here's one more to help you on your way to 101. I believe I'm #99, so you better to get to writing, lady ^__^
Anyway, great characters, great story and when your muse goes MIA, do what I do and start something else. It's fun to work on more than one fic at once, and if you ever encounter a block with one, you can just work on the other. A couple of other things I do are break out my Inu DVDs and reread the manga online. You'd be surprised how much inspiration I get from those two things. And I reread my fic from the beginning and that sometimes spawns new ideas.
Keep up the excellent work and have a happy vacation--theMaven :)
Anyway, great characters, great story and when your muse goes MIA, do what I do and start something else. It's fun to work on more than one fic at once, and if you ever encounter a block with one, you can just work on the other. A couple of other things I do are break out my Inu DVDs and reread the manga online. You'd be surprised how much inspiration I get from those two things. And I reread my fic from the beginning and that sometimes spawns new ideas.
Keep up the excellent work and have a happy vacation--theMaven :)
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter as always. please keep up the good work.
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's great. I'm very impressed by the complexity of the characters and their relationships. So far it is a wonderful story and I really enjoy it. I hope your writer's block dies a quick and painless death and you can get to the next chapter before thursday! :-D Thanks for all you've written so far!
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was not bad. Not bad at all. I enjoyed it I just wished that Gizin (I know I spelled his name wrong)was not a jerk. Poor
Yo, I just hope that what Neji ( spell that name wrong too) is offering is enough. Maybe he will change his mind eiallially he starts
to enjoy Yo company more and more to the point she will stay with him as long as he live. Update soon.
Yo, I just hope that what Neji ( spell that name wrong too) is offering is enough. Maybe he will change his mind eiallially he starts
to enjoy Yo company more and more to the point she will stay with him as long as he live. Update soon.