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i love this story. i followed it on ff.net for the longest time, and recently started following it here. i'm glad that you updated. yes, i feel your shared frustration with school and work. i wish i could write more often as well. in any case, keep it up but don't let your real life suffer. quality is always appreciated over quantitiy, anyway. good luck!

AHHHHHH!!! how could you be so evil ! bad evil author wahh I want to know what happens or Ill be sad forever the last chap had me saying what?!!! the whole time , so please update soon or Ill die!!! but I give you a 12 out of 10 for your story.

Oh my god...they're human now....I know Sesshomaru will not disown them....but damn!!!!!.....And thank you for killing that bitch...forcing her will upon others was not good....update soon

I cannot believed that you updated. I am jumping for joy. Oooh my are they human for good. Will their
demon power return to them in time. Will this cat demon be Saraku's future mate? Update soon.

GREAT Story...

When's the next chapter coming out?! ***;_;*** I have no more Sessh/Rin stories for me to read on my train ride to work... Whst else could I rea *** ***;_;***

"Neesan" means "older sister". Makoto is older than Saraku right? So if she is going to call Saraku "sister" she should say "Imouto" which means "younger sister". This is a very great fic if a bit on the dark side.

This is an excellent stoy, I t wat wait for you to update! You mentione that it had taken an extremely long time for you to updaate due to writers block. Do suggestions from reviewers help at all? Maybe it would help if at the end of each chapter, you put out a date. Something akin to "I WILL have the next chapter out no later than ____." That gives your reviewers a tangible date to come back and you a goal. And whoever called your story bullshit should have been bitch-slapped. Blantant, unprovoked insults are inexcusible and should not have to be tolerated. If they didn't like the story, why were they reading? Furthermore, it's hardly their place to judge the quality of story ideas - as long as it is pleasing to the author, what does their opinion matter? On that note, I myself have left reviews that, while they were certainly less than stelar, were NOT flames. Criticizing spelling and grammer errors, as well as sentance structure, could be deemed acceptable, buly ily if you offer suggestions for corrections. It's rude to knock somebody down without offering them a hand up. Or better yet, if you don't have hinghing nice to say, don't say anything at all!" Either way, I look forward to the next installment in your story.

You updated?!!!!! That is great. I was getting bored reading some of the fics that are out there and believe me they are so bad that I am seriously
thinking to stop reading fafics. The only reason I do not do it is because they are a small handful of good fanfics that out there that peak my interest. This
story is one of them. I just enjoy the meaning that you bring out in your story instead of the stories out there that just tell a story with no depth and no
feelings behind what they are writing. Just keep up with the good work and I will be looking forward to read the next chapter.

I like this chapter and I recognized the once hanyou. She is the one who helped Inuyasha gain the power to break barriers.
I hope that Sess can sense that something is wrong and go after his children. If not Sess then Inuyasha. Update soon.

NO!!!!!!!!!THEY CAN BECOME HUMAN.... THAT LADY HAS SOME NERVE....FORCEING HER CHOICE ON THEM......PLEASE LET SOMEONE SAVE THEM BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!!!!!!!SESSHOMARU WHERE ARE YOU???????????!!!!!!!!!!!. GREAT UPDATE....I UNDERSTAND THE SCHOOL STUFF...UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN.......