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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I have been looking forward to this sequel for a long time! The first chapter did not disapoint either, again I must commend you for being a magnificent writer! I look forward to the next chapter!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEE!!* This is SO perfect!! Gotta have more soon!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool, I was waiting for Sess' perspective on all of this!!! Kinda wished you would have developed their relationship a bit more when they were finally together, but I guess this makes up for it all ^_^
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I didn't think you would give them a daughter, but it adds to the story a great deal and anyway, predictable stuff isn't exciting ;)
Great chapter and I liked the foundation you built with Sess. I liked the little look into his mind and thoughts. Thanks and I can't wait for more.
Great chapter and I liked the foundation you built with Sess. I liked the little look into his mind and thoughts. Thanks and I can't wait for more.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaawwwwww, a baby girl. i'm so happy for them. this is starting off really good and its also good that you incorporated scenes from your past story. good work.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start on this sequel. I thought that a baby girl would be a nice change instead of the obvious. I just
surprise that Sesshoumaru was wrong on his child sex lol. Feeling has he does about hanyou, will have
a father and daughter realationship. He can not manhanded a female as he would probably done to his son.
Will his daughter be the spilt personality of her father? Update soon.
surprise that Sesshoumaru was wrong on his child sex lol. Feeling has he does about hanyou, will have
a father and daughter realationship. He can not manhanded a female as he would probably done to his son.
Will his daughter be the spilt personality of her father? Update soon.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The summary's not the best. Not the worst either. At least you can spell. ;-) but waht I really liked what your explaination of sessh's indecision about Rin in the previous story. Sessh is a difficult character to get into. His mind does not work like a human's and you must be able to look at things pretty differently to understand him. I think you did a pretty decent job.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY we got the BABY!!!! *dances* im liking this so far, its going to be good. yes, ur right. keeping sesshomaru in character is difficult, but if he grew to love and express love, i would say thats not going out of character but ENHANCING or character development--- you have creative rights u know *wink*. anyways, keep up the great work and good luck with u paper due weds. hehe, we all need luck when writing those things.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i was waiting for this story to begin! i sign on everyday hoping to see it pop up and here it is. thank you! it was a good beginning. nothing beats a recap with a new daughter! can't wait until the next chapter. good luck on your paper. im glad im not taking english this semester.