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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like to give my two cents for the next update......maybe have a little more of Saraku in the village...maybe have her help Makoto get over her shyness so the headman wil not bother her anymore.....I can'twait until the next update........
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You updated yiippppeeee!!! ^_^ I soo happy that you did and this is one of your best chapters. I like how Saraku confronts her cousin and reminds them who they are and how she treated the headman's son. Priceless,more of it PLEASE!!!!! Sesshoumaru will be so proud. As for the girl that played with Saraku in the village, did he really felt sorry for her like he felt for Rin all those years ago?
You stated that Sess does not want to hear the scream of his wife and daughter again (found in those situation betweeen life and d). W). Will something
like that will happen in the future for one of them or his niece???? I hope that you can write something that will forge a bond between Saraku and Madiko (sorry for spelling her namincorrectly). Maybe a sitauation in which the headman's doe does retailate on Madiko and Saraku was wittness. Maybe her family can see her in action. Well great chapterand please update soon.
You stated that Sess does not want to hear the scream of his wife and daughter again (found in those situation betweeen life and d). W). Will something
like that will happen in the future for one of them or his niece???? I hope that you can write something that will forge a bond between Saraku and Madiko (sorry for spelling her namincorrectly). Maybe a sitauation in which the headman's doe does retailate on Madiko and Saraku was wittness. Maybe her family can see her in action. Well great chapterand please update soon.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Oh man, I was so excited I almost wet myself! ;)
Yes, I would love to sere ore of Saraku in the village. I would really like to see an interaction between Inuyasha's daughter, the headman's son, and Saraku. Just because I would get perverse pleasure out of it lol, and I think Makato (??) really deserves to build some pride.
This chapter was great, I like how Sesshoumaru handled the respect issue from the village.
Please, update soon, I absolutely love your stories!
Yes, I would love to sere ore of Saraku in the village. I would really like to see an interaction between Inuyasha's daughter, the headman's son, and Saraku. Just because I would get perverse pleasure out of it lol, and I think Makato (??) really deserves to build some pride.
This chapter was great, I like how Sesshoumaru handled the respect issue from the village.
Please, update soon, I absolutely love your stories!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*GLOMP* I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I started reading it, and then went back to read the previous one! OMG! Amazing! Please please please keep going!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i doN't usuaLly reView, buT i liKe yOur stOries And I notIced yoU keeP rEposting wiThout nEw cHapters so i thOught You miGht nEed moRe encoUragement. i gEt reAlly excIted wheN i sEe tHe Post aNd i jUst caN't taKe mOre reJection. plEase giVe uS a nEw chApter sOon. We LOVE yOu.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. I like how you showed the father and daughter bond that Sess and Saraku has. I think you had
shown that when Sess was in the woods looking for Saraku and he smelled her blood I think for a brief moment
Sesshoumaru thought that he was going to find his daughter in the same state as he found Rin (when she hanging from the tree dead).
I do not think that Sess could go through another situation like thnvolnvolving his daughter. That is where Inuyasha comes in to the mixture.
As much as he love his son, he will have a special bond with Saraku that
will be strong then the relationship between himself and his son. Update soon.
shown that when Sess was in the woods looking for Saraku and he smelled her blood I think for a brief moment
Sesshoumaru thought that he was going to find his daughter in the same state as he found Rin (when she hanging from the tree dead).
I do not think that Sess could go through another situation like thnvolnvolving his daughter. That is where Inuyasha comes in to the mixture.
As much as he love his son, he will have a special bond with Saraku that
will be strong then the relationship between himself and his son. Update soon.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You really put everything together not only explaining Saraku's POV but Sess as well.
When Sess made the statement that he was furious with his daughter but he did not know what he would
do if anything worst happen to her. He was afraid of a repeat (what happen to Rin when she was killed). I liked
how you wrapped everything together in this chapter for both character. SaraSaraku will be ready for her true adventure.
I love her 'punishement' she will be facing. Living with Inuyasha for two-week? Is that a good idea Sesshoumaru as well as Sessy ^_^ ????
I think so she can help her cousin to be stronger and defend herself as well as Saraku learning that her 'weakness' classified
in the demon community will ultimately be her strength. I hope that you could bring that out during this
story. Update soon. ^_^
When Sess made the statement that he was furious with his daughter but he did not know what he would
do if anything worst happen to her. He was afraid of a repeat (what happen to Rin when she was killed). I liked
how you wrapped everything together in this chapter for both character. SaraSaraku will be ready for her true adventure.
I love her 'punishement' she will be facing. Living with Inuyasha for two-week? Is that a good idea Sesshoumaru as well as Sessy ^_^ ????
I think so she can help her cousin to be stronger and defend herself as well as Saraku learning that her 'weakness' classified
in the demon community will ultimately be her strength. I hope that you could bring that out during this
story. Update soon. ^_^
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, are you a psych major or something because it sounds to me like you've studied human behavior a bit.
I like it. Please continue.
BTW, I read a bit of my own fan fic in my creative writing class and my teacher, my 50 yr old male teacher, said that he'd like there to be more "alien sex" in the story. That's right ALIEN SEX. how he got alien out of demon, I'm not quite sure. There were about five of us that nearly swallowed our tongues. Sha
I like it. Please continue.
BTW, I read a bit of my own fan fic in my creative writing class and my teacher, my 50 yr old male teacher, said that he'd like there to be more "alien sex" in the story. That's right ALIEN SEX. how he got alien out of demon, I'm not quite sure. There were about five of us that nearly swallowed our tongues. Sha
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you enjoy writing with or without chapters. Just Kidding, if I wrote stories on here I'm sure I'd be upset if I wasn't getting some feedback/praise. And since you are my favorite writer I supposed a little reminder of that each chapter is the least I can do. Seriously though, great chapter. I can't wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
err..."with or without REVIEWS." I guess I should start proof reading my posts.