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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Looks at rating*
Harsh.
In the end, Inuyasha is going to make Kagome feel better, right? There are several interesting avenues you can still follow in this story. Some happy, some not. I'm interested in seeing what you do.
Harsh.
In the end, Inuyasha is going to make Kagome feel better, right? There are several interesting avenues you can still follow in this story. Some happy, some not. I'm interested in seeing what you do.
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey ... this is a very differnt fic. no ofence but the best part was the author notes. its juat that the hold inuyasha and sesshomaru fighting over kagome thing is well .... confusing. you just dont go and rape someone then say you love them .. of couse sesshomaru never said that but he implyed it. i have to go now. ja ne
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No worries. I just thought it was strange the story showed up hear after reading it two years ago. Anyways since it is indeed yours no harm done. =)
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story but you got a couple of names wrong like KOUGA and KEADE not kougyo, or code, those don't even sound like their names.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm. I've read this before.. years ago in fact. If you are the same author then okay.. if not. then.. *raises a brow*
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
umm will it is a good start bt set seems you have the same chap 3 times or am i missing some thing lol hey it could just be me lol any who lol i hope to see reasreast of this soon lol
Naheta
Naheta
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fanfic, can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's really not that bad of a story, its got the makings of a good one actually. If you would like I could be a beta reader for you. Just let me know.
RedNeko
RedNeko