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for Enemy of My Enemy

by Loki

person Kurai
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes DEFINITELY worthy of being continued +______________+ I Love this TOOO Much, you cant just write something and kill it. SO CONTINUE PLEASE! *really looking forward to the rest of the fic* Naraku! Sesshoumaru! ^_____________^ This is very very interesting ... and arousing too... *did I just say that?* ::whistles innocently::
person DEM
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow... write part two soon please.
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. It's got a dark side to it, but don't all humans have a bit of a dark side too? I think it's cool!!! I can't wait until you update soon!!!!! Uh oh, I'd better go rewrite my two stories. *sigh* The life of an author is never done is it? *sigh* Ja!
person dumdeedum
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so HAPPY you've decided to continue with this story, that I am just beside myself!!!

This is one of the best I've read, lemon not withstanding, it certainly isn't PWP to me! It's dark, erotic, sensual and the last chapter, full of suspense and tension. This story has it all!!!

After Sesshomaru/Kagome, I equally like Miroku/Kagome and Naraku/Kagome pairings. Heck, I wouldn't mind if Kagome ends up with Naraku in the story, that is UNLESS the Lord of the Western lands gets over himself and get his act together. As you can see, I'm partial to S/K pairings. Nevertheless, whatever outcome you decide will be fine with me since this is one well written gem of a story!

As for InuYasha? Hmmm, maybe him and Kagura?

Thanks so much for updating and I eagerly await new chapters!! Keep up the good work!
person hitomi
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg...this is sucha great story plase update it soon!!!!ess/kag 4 eva
person Crash
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so (I'm sure you get the point by now) happy that you decided to continue with this fic. As always, your writing is wonderful. You ask if it is good enough to continue, I say most definately YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please do update again soon.
Later - Crash
person kathy
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you decided to continue this story. And how! With thid turn, you have made this one completely unpredictable. You surprised me a few times... I hope to see the next chapter soon.
person Katzztar
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOKI UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

***Jumps out of chair and dances around room*****

Wecome back L O K I !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Rei
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn - and all of us readers figured that Sesshoumaru actually cared for Kagome! Please don't let Naraku do anything to her, ok? She's traumatized enough as it is -- Sess need to go rescue her and redeem his sorry ass! *heh* Well, update soon plz!
person CM
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!! UPDATE!!! SOON! OR ELSE!