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for Enemy of My Enemy

by Loki

person Ms.Videl Son
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that you will continue this...I found it first on A Single Spark, but had no way short of a pestering e-mail (which I hate) to tell you how much I admired it and hoped there was another chapter/part in the works. Well, luckily for me, and possibly you, I have avoided that pestering e-mail and am able to tell you here...

I don't read many lemons bwhenwhen I do, I want them to be something like this. I feel that they need to have some sort of plot or they're simply "literary porn" (though it's probably that anyway, hehe). I feel that any lemon worth writing has a backstory and enough detail to make you want to read more than just the citrusy parts. I've found few like this, however, and I'm pleased to say that yours has all the qualities that I search for when looking for a story with a "lemony twist."

Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with me and everyone else on the net (should they choose to look for it).

Ja!!!

~*Ms.Videl Son*~ of Fanfiction.net AKA Green*Eyed*Monster, A Eudemon of Qualityfiction.net (http://qualityfiction.cjb.net/)
person Lease
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ip chp checking for an update and hoping to find part 5. This is the only Sesshoumaru/Kagome story that stands apart from the mass of re-written, re-plagerized plots! You are truly a gifted writer. Please, please continue.......
person Onyx Sapphire
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!! O___O;; please.......me beggest thy........;_;....*cough* so um yeah, when are you gonna upload the next chappie? ^____^;;;;
person Sei
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue...this is a good read :)
person Kurai
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please Please continue soon! I've reread your fic ... again ^___^ It's so ... amazing!!! @____@ Please Please Please!!! Hontou ni Onegaishimasu! Must WRite More Soon!!!
person thrax
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice story you got here! Very interesting, update soon!
person Shelly
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Continue, continue, continue! Of course u should continue, it's really good!!! CONTINUE A.S.A.P.!!!!!!!!!
person caliko
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YOU BETTER FINISH THIS SOON! OMG OMG OMG.. ^_^ This is, btw, no PWP at ALL! The plot line is nice and angsty, the thought processes nice and deep.. the sex is .. oh boy.. the sex is MORE than good! LOL.. **hubby gonna be a happy camper tonight** ~Caliko
person DR. Bigglesworth the 3rd
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your fuckin' syco! Sesshoumeru and Kagomea?! what the hell is in that sick brain of yours?!

because if you could fit some of it into the next chapter i'd be very happy! in fact, it would probly make my day!

great story write more or i'll hunt you down and eat your childeren!.......just kidding!!! but still, write more!

~Dr. Bigglesworth the 3rd~
person AnimedivaUrd
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you continued!!!