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for Enemy of My Enemy

by Loki

person Anolea
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. The first time I read this fic was four months ago and i have yet to see any improvement.

Sesshy: please? I do wish to know what I will do next.
Kagome: look how she left me! why do you want her to continue?

Ano: because i am a sess/kag fan who likes "dark" fics. and besides you don't have a problem when I write about your many deaths.

Sesshy: What? ::looks at Kagome:: I though you were all about the fluff
Kagome: That's ::sweatdrop:: "fluffy" ::runs from Sesshy::

While I deal with these two please hurry.

Come to me, and all is welcome.

Anolea
person OtakuSailorV
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. ^^ I was looking for something good to take away my bordem today, and your story has done it. Bang up job. ^^
person Ymanetta
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes you need to continue. I think this story is great, plus i love Sess and Kagome fics anyway. I think your doing a great job writting also. Please please please please update soon.
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story
person Cabel
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story, please update!! Please? C'mon, you know you want to. A great story like this should not have to be nbe not updated. Yeah. All these twists in this story are great! It's like...woosh! And I was like whoa! And then naraku was all like, 'all you have is me'. And Sess was all like, 'I love her..grrr...get away from me!' And we were all like..'whoa'. Ignore my idiocity. But, seriously, you should update cuz this story is really good.

Don't be too hard on yourself. Like they always say, writers are always thier own biggest critic. Right?

This is a wonderful fic.

Please continue.

Please?

With a million dollars on top, cuz that is so much better than a stupid small cherry that will hardly fill you up. Plus, with a million dollars you can buy as many cherries as you want and then up! Se! See, look at that, it would make everyone happy!
person woo-wee twinz
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sista Wooz: Totally Rock Out Loud!!!
Sista Weez: U sd tod totally continue this!!
InuYasha: When do *I* come in!?!
Sesshoumaru: Never. Y would any1 want u to anyway
Wooz: now fluffy-kun be nice 2 yur brother
Inu: FEH! why bother
Weez: INU-KUN! itz time to *take a bath*
Weez&Sess: I dont even wanna kno.
All: L8R!!!! and CONTINUE AND MAKE SURE TO UPDATE REGULERLY AND FAST!!
person Kobayashi
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story.. the whole sesshy screwing kag when he did was kinda weird, but hell, screwing in time of danger must be a huge rush.. *wink*
person sad
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice story and i don't know why there is nak/kag i hate the pair. now sess/kag the best pair in my opinion.
person kijotenshi
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
L O K I:

this is, most definitely, worth continuing.
Ambiguous, romance... it's like watching Evangelion all over again...
Though, ultimately less confusing to interpret.
-but of course, ne?

continue this. I'd be willing to BETA it for you. ^^;;
you can find me on FF.net under "kijotenshi" or @ SSpark.
pop me an email, sometime, if your interested.

__ki
person Rachel
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story and loowaroward to more updates. There were no dates losted so hopefully this is not an abandoned story : (
Thanks ag Rac