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I forgot to mention Naraku. I suspect that he is still on his trip on wanting to separate Kagome and Inuyasha (manga graffic novel 12). And what better way to hurt Inuyasha again by getting Kagome and Sesshoumaru together? I think that's one reason he blindfolded Kagome. Not only did that make (well suppose to, but she's so stubborn) Kagome feel Withoutelpless, but make her other senses compensate.

Loki, I hope you reconsider stopping this fic. Take a break if you need to. But this story is too good to let one flamer bring you down, permately. As another fanfic author I understand that sometimes one has to take a break....(in small voice) I've got two stories hanging on FF.N since last spring. I still plan on finishing them, just not yet.

Most lemons I've came across are true PWP Porn Without Plot. Many are stinkers, 'he penatrated, they came, he pulled out' thats it.

Your story is nowhere like that. It does make us think, it apears to have a plot. AND it has great description of the sex.

You are a good writer.

I'm really sorry that you had such a nasty review, and the only thing I can say is that that person can't read! It was certainly not rape! I'm really sorry that such a person can ruin such a good story for you. But I respect your decision not to continue with this story... alth I t I think it is a shame. I do hope you will soon update on fanfiction.net. You do write very good stories!!! Do not let somebody make you believe otherwise!!! I really look forward to an update to 'It changes evrything'!

I really hope that you'll get a break soon, from whatever kind of troubles you're going through. I hope this will make you feel somewhat better!

Keep this chapter, please!! I really like Sesshoumaru's way of thinking and changing throughout the chapter. Sure it was long, but that's what made it great!! Feel free to update soon!! (Hint hint...lol)

I'm SO sorry! I REALLY REALLY LOVE your story. Please don't stop writing b/c of someone who upset you. I understand if you need a break from it for awhile, but please don't stop. Keep writing to show them they can't stop you and maybe once they read the whole thing they'll get the point. I read that part where the reviewer said 'he was raping her'. That really pissed me off. It's obviously very clear that Kagome is enjoying it, so its not rape. I have had that experience as well as you and you're right, it isn't beautiful OR sexy. Obviously this person has never had this experience and will never understand it. I mean its one thing to think how horrible it would be to have that happen to you, and actually have it happen are two completely different things. You can't even describe it really, and the emotional aftermath is wdevadevastating. I'rry rry again that this person upset you, but I sincerely wish/hope that you finish this story.

-wails-You can't scrap it! You got me hooked, lined, and sinkered to this story. I find it far more interesting than I have any other Sess/Kag story I have read so far. Please, please with sugar and cream do continue this story further.

WOW!! That was steamy! When's the next chapter? I can't wait to read on!

I enjoy this story. I've been reading it @ FFnet but I check up on it here sometimes along with others. I can't wait for you to update. I hope its really soon. I just adore Sess/Kag parings, and I'm just dying to know what Naraku is REALLY up to. I liked how Sesshoumaru realizes he loves her now. That's great! Keep up the good work.

This was definately worth the wait. I loved the suspence,the overall mood, the sex ;)

Not too long at all. It's a nice change from the "they stripped, he penetrated, they came" nature of so many fanfics out e. Ae. And very well written to boot. Eagerly awaiting the next installment ...

Please hurry and update!...lol. I've been waiting and waiting to read what happens next!