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Hey, I don't know about other people out there, but I totally understood the fic. Yeah sure, she's a little OOC, but she knew who it was. Totally sorry about your personal experinces in life, and can somewhat sympathize with you, my sis was gang raped, and I live in a small town. You were also doing a really good job writing it, and it's a shame because of someone else's stupidity that you are stopping but I understand the reasoning behind it. I hope that maybe sometime in the future you will feel compelled to start it back up. Luck with you other fics. Crash

Wow, i have to say that reviewer was really off base. In my opinion, your story was really great and i was fully enjoying it, because not many people can write a kag/sess without the whole senario of kagome walking in on inu yasha and kikyou. I really hope that you will continue. Furthermore, it wasnt rape. Kagome was enjoying herself. And what about love at first sight??? Dang it, they could've fallen falllen in love like that!!! (at least sesshy could've) Well thats all i have to say.

well guess what, i'm just loving the fic so don't worry and keep writing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Well, to be honest, I was going to ask some similar questions myself. Mainly because it was a bit hard to tell where you were going with this story, I guess--it really didn't feel like PWP, which says something about how well you wrote it ^_^;;; I suppose I was really waiting to see what happened next before commenting. I will a wit with your anon. reviewer to a point...it was a bit strange how Kagome managed to figure out who was playing with her, given her situation. Hell, it might as well have been Naraku...

And actually, I was really interested in what Naraku's role in all this was. I was half-expecting for Sess to find tha that Naraku had deceived him (or Kagome!) somehow...it's the sort of plot the bastard would think of. After all, they are in the middle of his lair...would have added a nice, dark twist on the story. But alas, I suppose we will never know. I respect your decision to stop writing a fic that isn't fun anymore, but it sure is a shame.

Also, I don't want to hide behind the anonymous curtain, but you leave me no choice--I can't find an email contact for you. Normally, I review lemon content via email--it's much more respectful of everybody's privacy. Sorry about that! But if you'd like to find me, I'm one of your "baka" fanfic net reviewers too...and I still support your writing 100% ^_~

-baka yarou

Ok, (taking in a very deep breath) Dear Loki just to make thing clear to you as well as me before my brain is going to blow from anger. DO NOT TAKE THAT ... THAT .. (damn i can't think of any words in any languages that is low enough to describe that coward, and trust me i do know 4 languages) TO YOUR HEAD. It probably just being overly jealous or just being one of those 'i can't stand any thing that could be better than 'it' toilet hole head. I am enjoying the fic and i'm over 100% positive that other reader are too. And just to make my point of view clear "don't you think that if you stop writing the 'it' would be jumping for joy that it have that power over u???? " When you come across the being like that just ignore it, i'm sure that THE THING could not be class as a being for being so damn low. Now that feel a lot better. So please keep writing i don't care if i sound corny but i am loving the fic.










And to the 'it' if u have any problems my email is up there.

Please reconsider discontinueing this story. It's great! The reason I started coming to this site was to read your story. The person who worte that horrable and mean spirited review either 1) isn't mature enough to read stories like yours, or 2) can't read. Please don't punish the rest of your fans and yourself for one person's stupidity. Here's to hoping you find the joy in your story again!

Tegasus
the the way, if you want me e-mail addy, it's on ff.n. I don't like passing it out to everyone. ^_^)

gosh....i was so looking forward to hearing more on this story....that's too bad. but seriously....you shouldn't let a bad review stou fou from this kick ass story...i love this story.....but since it's no longer fun for you to write more on it, maybe i'll get to read a new one you mightrt srt some time soon? I really enjoy your work!

I first started reading this on fanfiction, found it was great and followed it here though I was hoping you would continue but I that decision is totoaly up to you. Also I like to congradulate you. Very few can right an actual story with good punctuation, grammer, spelling, etc. I've read a lot of crap that both sounds and looks like a eight year old wrote them.
Continue with the great work, even if it isn't this story.

I am really sorry that you won't be continuing this story. It was one of the stories that I actually came here to read because I felt it was far better written than those I have seen with Sesshoumar/Kagome. I know, at this point, that this may not count but there are a few of us out there that were really enjoying this story and it sucks to see someone take this one piece of great fiction and end the author's creativity. If only we could burn those annoying and pesky anomity flamers. I would have a BBQ with them. >/

What the...? That's one misguided reviewer. I never thought that Sesshoumaru was raping her. I know there is a difference between rape and sedution.

Before I go on, let me say the rest is for a few other reviewers (like the critic) to think on.
I actually enjoy Loki's work and await the rest of this great story.

Rapewhenwhen one FORCES sex on another.
Sedution is inticing one , getting them to agree to the sex.

From what I read, Sesshoumaru enticed Kagome, not force her. For crying out loud, do they even try to really read (as in PAY ATTENTION) the story?

As for Kagome, we wre warned that she will seem OOC. I think she was aware it was Sesshoumaru.
For one thing, he's very powerful, therefor his youki (energy) would be likewise. Kagome is able to sense a demon's youki, remember people she is a miko. She has met him before so she would know his energy.
Secondly,ok She is blindfolded, to those out there that don't know, that means that one sense (sight) is taken away her other senses would compensate. In other words, her sense of touch for instance.remember that, I will bring it up again.Kagome would notice that there was only ONE hand touching her,not two.

Ok on to her 'acting like a slut,re' re' whatever you weant to call it. She was not! Kagome is acting like a teenager. Why hasn't she jumped inuyasha? simple Inu's paying attention to Kikyo, and sometimes throws insults at Kagome. It's hard to act on your attration to a guy when he acts like that.
Why not Miroku? Simple Kagome knows he's a flirt, he's like that with all women.
Kagome is NOT a slut she's a teen on the way to becoming a woman. All young women want to know they are beutiful, that SOMEONE finds them attractive.

So why didn't she resist Seshoumaru? Think about it. Here is a youkai lord who is 'suppose' to hate humans. But he finds Kagome attractive enough that he overlooks that she is human (or at the very least born to humans).
Aslo remember the seduction? This is where the heightenedsense of touch comes into play. Sesshoumaru did not stop, he kept enticing her until her lust overwhelmed her restraint. Thhere is also the temptation of the forbibben. Whats more 'forbibben' than a heated sexual encounter with Sesshoumaru?? The youkai that hates humans lusting for a human-born girl?

I wasn't planning on making a review of my view , in this sort of manner. I ussually review saying 'great story' and the like. But after reading Loki's responce to some nut's review, i realized that I should. At the very least to show this great author that some of us actually DO THINK about whats going on.