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for Enemy of My Enemy

by Loki

person dem again
schedule February 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh hey and dont worry about the no name guy. he's dumb. its your story. write
person Dreaming Phoenix
schedule February 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just gotta say, your story is great. Who cares if people just suddenly learn that they love somebody? Sometimes, it takes a while for some people to realize that they love somebody and sometimes it takes some action to make them realize that. You were just writing from the heart (like all writers do) and it is the heart of a true writer. Know this, all writers come across criticism at some point and I've dealth with those a lot, but you know what, I enjoy them (strangely enough) because I know, I can prove them worng and guess what? I wrote a story that some like. It doens't matter if some people don't like your story, it matters to us, the other readers who actually enjoys your story. I'm not gonna let some dumbass get me down if they don't like my story. show them what you got and show them well so they'll be coming back to beg for your forgiveness, or if that's too rough, just write for us. It's people like you who inspire us to write and read and it's people like us who want you to continue to write because we love what you write. So continue your story and don't let anyone get you down. You are unique and special and you've got talent that shouldn't go to waste. (^_^)


Always,

Dreaming Phoenix

The Dream Of The Phoenix Is That I Always Come Back! (literally! I come back everyday to see if you've updated!)
person vegetasmoon
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
never and i mean never let someone's flames did inspire you. prove to them how st the they are. They usually can't write a story themselves. It takes alot of guts to post a story. tust me I know. But now I confident. I have some great writer's who read my stuff and they like it. One great review is worth a thousand flames. mainly because you have touched that one person. So for all the people who absolutely love your story stick w/it for yourself and them. The flamer did not even write there name. you just keep doing what you like to do and be damned w/ the flamers. I have had my share as well. I ignore them. I write for myself and if others enjoy it so be it. so don't get discouraged. look at ll the people who like you!!!Good luck w/ what ever you decide!!!
person vegetasmoon
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that word in the first sentance is supposed to be uninspire!! sorry
person Vegeta's angel
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
right on, I think you handled that nicely
person Vegeta's angel
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And this is a wonderfull story, I love it and it is well written and the plots are great. Keep up the good work
person Hikari no Hime
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First thank for the mail. And just to make thing clear i never said my knowledge of the languages are perfect (hey English is not even my first, beside i'm still learning) but yeah so what nobody is perfect i'm only human and i'm sure you are. So i'm vicious well i just write the review from my point of view which i'm sure you did as well.. Oh and another thing i'm sure the author and I are just piss******** and by the look of it, we're not the only one :P
person DemonTainted
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello

This story was suggested to me by a friend; I myself admit I have exceptionally high standards for fanfics/fics/stories/books/etc that I read and review. I was not disappointed with yours.

I've read the offensive review made by the anonymous reviewer, personaly I believe her reviews to be out of line and sadly misguided. Some people will never understand layered concepts nor the intended meaning behind written words. Her loss on a great story.

Truthfully I wish the bint would step foreward with her name so I could actually send her a few viruses and such. But since he/she/ it... whatever your bloody preferance won't, we're all just sadly disappointed.

As for your fanfI woI would sincerely hope you'd continue it, one can always find new joy in old ones and all that rot. Enemy of My Enemy showed great potential; you hinted (intentionaly or not) at a great plot and much angst-like trauma to both personas of Sesshoumaru and Kagome, not to mention the Inuyasha company when they find out about the most unlikely coupling.

I myself write fanfictions, though on ff.net since I've only recently discovered this site... (if you see any mis-spellings in here it is due to my fast typing hands and my brain...which is always seventy-nine steps ahead of said hands....)

I'm sure my review has little swayed your opinion and overall judgement to discontinue this fic though I strongly suggest you continue it anyway to both your own future enjyment and to spite the bloody coward whom can't even step from the shadows.

This fanfic was truly worthwhile and I hope to find more of your works in the future.

Peace & ChAoS

-DemonTainted
person Toytoy
schedule February 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just like to say I like all your storyes.Nomatter what other people say,I think there GRAET!!!!!! I hop you go on with Enemy of my Enemy.It was just getten good.Tell how ever it was that got you down to go to BLOODYHELL!!!! Forever your fan Toytoy.
person Toytoy
schedule February 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just like to say I like all your storyes.Nomatter what other people say,I think there GRAET!!!!!! I hop you go on with Enemy of my Enemy.It was just getten good.Tellwho ever it was that got you down to go to BLOODYHELL!!!! Forever your fan Toytoy.