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March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not like it? what, are you crazy? for some reason, i'm really into the S/K pairing, and I always did think Sesshoumaru was sexier than Inuyasha. those scenes were fantastic! and now he realizes that he loves did did naraku plan for this? probably. so what's going to happen? don't keep us in suspense for long!
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March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Lovditloveditlovedit! In fact, I really like how Kagome went all wanton at the end. Keep writing those chapters, and i'll keep readin' and reviewin'!
P.S~why is this font so small? ~~Lizzie
P.S~why is this font so small? ~~Lizzie
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March 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a really good job with this, but it sounds like you just didn;t get the appreciation you deserve.
It was really well done. I think you should be proud of this piece, and i really like the Sesh/Kagome pairing. Don't give up just because of some ignorant jerks.
It was really well done. I think you should be proud of this piece, and i really like the Sesh/Kagome pairing. Don't give up just because of some ignorant jerks.
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March 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, it's me. Yeah I reviewed this first at ff.net, then came back here to review it on this web site. What was cool. And no some of the best lemons are long. I thought it was good, cause you didn't rush it and plus, I liked how at the end Kagome took control. lol, yeah, I'm laughing cause on some small level that aspect is funny. Ok so yup damn good fic. Very cool.
Laterz
Laterz
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February 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Incredibly well written! You've got this wonderful touch for writing erotica: multileveled and yet so very sensual. Kudos.
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February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loki -
I was just coming to check on this story, and it seems bad things have been happening in my absence.
I'm sorry that an idiot flamer made you give up on writing this story. I was really enjoying it, and would have liked to see where you took it - or should I say how you got it there ;) But if the fun is gone, it's gone. All I can say is please don't let it turn you off writing all together. That would be much more of a loss than one story. I'll be waiting for the next one, wherever it's posted.
@Miara
I was just coming to check on this story, and it seems bad things have been happening in my absence.
I'm sorry that an idiot flamer made you give up on writing this story. I was really enjoying it, and would have liked to see where you took it - or should I say how you got it there ;) But if the fun is gone, it's gone. All I can say is please don't let it turn you off writing all together. That would be much more of a loss than one story. I'll be waiting for the next one, wherever it's posted.
@Miara
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February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love anything about Sesshomaru. This was great!!!
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February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you responded in your letter to the Reviewer and I hope that you do not get anymore reviews like that. Any way I enjoyed reading what you have put out of your story and i hoped to read more of it soon.
Shadow_Goddesskio
Shadow_Goddesskio
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February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loki,
This is Shadow_Goddesskio again. I would really like you to continue with this story. I am an editor for a publishing company and I read a lot of manuscripts that really stink. If I were you I would try sending some of your original writings to companies and try to get them published. You have a lot of talent and I have enjoyed reading Enemy of My Enemy. I see writters every day who don't have your kind of talent and I would personally like to see you publish something. You have a way of bringing your storied to life that make a person believe that they are there with the characters. I hope that you do not let the rude and stupid remarks of some idiot ruin a wonderful story like this. There will always be people like the Reviewer out there ready to put some one down because they are either 1)jealous of your talent and and of all the fans you have following your stories or 2)the Reviewer is nothing more than a vicious little person that doesn't undertand that there are many different kinds of storie out there and if you don't like that Reviewer deal with it. Because let me tell you something Loki has great talent and just because you don't like the story then doesn't mean everyone esle doesn't like it. Its like I tell people who send mail to the publishing house and say that don't like something THEN DON'T READ IT. Loki finish this story and don't let people like the Reviewer make you angry. They are dime a dosen but real talent now thats rare. (My computer is doing strang things at the moment so if there are any misspelled words don't blame me because I have no idea what is wrong with this computer.)
Shadow_Godkio kio
This is Shadow_Goddesskio again. I would really like you to continue with this story. I am an editor for a publishing company and I read a lot of manuscripts that really stink. If I were you I would try sending some of your original writings to companies and try to get them published. You have a lot of talent and I have enjoyed reading Enemy of My Enemy. I see writters every day who don't have your kind of talent and I would personally like to see you publish something. You have a way of bringing your storied to life that make a person believe that they are there with the characters. I hope that you do not let the rude and stupid remarks of some idiot ruin a wonderful story like this. There will always be people like the Reviewer out there ready to put some one down because they are either 1)jealous of your talent and and of all the fans you have following your stories or 2)the Reviewer is nothing more than a vicious little person that doesn't undertand that there are many different kinds of storie out there and if you don't like that Reviewer deal with it. Because let me tell you something Loki has great talent and just because you don't like the story then doesn't mean everyone esle doesn't like it. Its like I tell people who send mail to the publishing house and say that don't like something THEN DON'T READ IT. Loki finish this story and don't let people like the Reviewer make you angry. They are dime a dosen but real talent now thats rare. (My computer is doing strang things at the moment so if there are any misspelled words don't blame me because I have no idea what is wrong with this computer.)
Shadow_Godkio kio
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February 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dude!!! i love this fic!!! pleeeease keep writing. really i will pine for it if you dont.