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Excellent story. I do however wish you'd go into more details and lengthen your chapters as well.

Ah! ~light bulb goes on in head~ I remember you. You're the authoress that wrote that mud fic with Kagome and Inuyasha. Which was a great fic by the way. Anyway, I'm always on the look out for Sesshou anu and Kagome stories so when I came upon this I just had to read it. So gladid. id. Maa, jusntednted to say that this is an awesome fic and I'm glad you're not rushing the inevitable romance between Sesshy and Kago. So, many authors do that and that just isn't cool. You've got to take it easy from time to time and let the characters develop. Besides, if we wanted to read just a plain omon mon then I'll be glad to point out some. Stories got to have a plot man even if it's minute. Well, I'll stop my ranting now. I can't wait for your next update. Ja.

omg! hellaz love this fic...ahaha...sux for u bitch kikyo...i mean...lolz...hellaz love this and please say it is gonna b a sesshoumaru and kagome fic...(too lazy to look at disclamer) lolz...udpate hellaz fast thnx and ja ne!

quit being mean to sesshoumaru-sama, just have inuyasha do something stupid with kikyo or something, get caught by kagome, she gets a divorce and lives happily ever after with sesshoumaru

wow.. sesshie's a bit horny in this ficcie isn't he? ^^ well plz update soon! um... are you gonna make inu end up with kikyo? i mean, i'm not against it... it's just that.. I HATE KIKYO! especially now that she got to be with sesshoumaru! i mean.. she doesn't deserve him! *pouts* hehez well post up the new chappie quickly pleeze! =]

cute story

First - (I am not being evil or mad with this) I think there is another story with this title, but it works I'm just pulling from my memory.
Second- I just didnt see Kagome just giving in to the sedding like that- do it or you'll be disinheritend-automatic complianec, i dont see her as being that weak and greedy, I was hoping for something closer to her saying fine, good bye father, heading out to the wedding guests saying farewell to her family telling INuyasha how sorry she is for the inconvience, being stopped by his dad, telling him off for using her and his son as business commodities-possibly slapping him-running into her dad on the way out -"Kagome, daughter please rethink this?" her response close to "I RETHINK THIS! YOUR THE ONE WHO SOLD HIS OWN DAUGHTER LIKE A SEX SLAVE!" and storming out leave a very bewildered group of guests. THen KAgome getting a job with Sango or Miroku-leaving with them possibly-meanwhile her father gong over what happened and her family's shock and the reactions of the brothers. I didnt think about this long its just it doesnt seem to me that KAgome would be so submissive specially about her virginity-Kikyou undoubtly infact I'd be shocked if she protested-but not Kagome. I hope this does sound as a flame-I read alot of fanfic and getting a bit frustrated at the ones that arent finished and theyre full o fplot (some a bit too much) anyway It is a good story and you should continue as you want to, its not my rightr to tell u how to write. PLease dont take this wrong! GOod luck Ja NE!

omg, this story is great. cept, my opinion, inuyasha sounds a bit ooc. he's nice wow. neways, great story, cya laterz

Great begining plz continue!

for ur first sess/kag fic its starting out great! =D i hope u keep updating!!