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for Torn Between Two Brothers

by inuyashasgirl

person Misery
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that the story was going great, but I must say that Kag let the whole sessho forcing himself on her go way too easily. No one is THAT nieve.
person Helen
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gah! ~starts to pull out own hair~ What the hell. I though Sesshoumaru was the father, but it's Inuyasha. Please tell me this is just some scheme concocted by Sesshoumaru's mother to separate him from Kagome. ~gives puppy dog eyes to author~ Mou, at least Sesshoumaru is just getting pleasured orally by Rin and not fucking her vaginally. That would have been terrible. He might have impregnated her accidently. Anyway, I'm so glad you updated. Keep up the good work. Ja.
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..if this turns Inu/Kag I will be greatly disantednted.
person Helen
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope the baby makes it. ~fists hand~ Damn Sesshy's and Inu's mom. Why'd she have to be such a bitch? Anyway, great follow-up. I can't wait to read what happens next.
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, yah didn't get Kagome to tell Inuyasha and Sesshomaru what the bitch mother told her. PLEASE DON'T LET THE BABY BE TAKEN AWAY!!!!!!! THAT WOULD SO BE THE MOST HORRIBLE THING IN THE WORLD OF THIS STORY! PLEASE don'tit. it.
person Tanya
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I finally finished all the present chapters, and I must say that I'm impressed! I feel sorry for Inuyasha. Perhaps you may have somebody else in mind for him? ^.^ But yes, excellent story and I hope to read more soon! Ja ne! Tanya
person Tanya
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! Ouch. I can understand Mrs. Nobunaga's feelings... I have to admit that if I were her, I'd probably say the same things... but be a bit more understanding, and I'd probably apologise... but that isn't the case! lol! Hope to see more of this story soon! Ja ne! Tanya
person DragonDame57
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeesh.. i hate sesshie's mom! she's a biyatch.. pft. well update soon!
person SesshoumarusMistress
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The more I read the more i like.... very good job PLEASE write more and update ASAP!!
person LIL D
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the story....but i hope the baby is Inuyasha's....you know kinda of a suprise twist.....i love sesshomaru but i don't think he deserves her after he rape her.///////