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Okay. Let's just say that I'm slightly peeved by how this fic turned out. In don don't get me wrong. I loved that Kagome finally took the initiative and ended this rollar coaster of a relationship with Sesshoumaru, but with Kouga.e one on. You could have at least made her out to be more independant and self-reliant. There plenty of women out there who make excellant single mothers/parents. Though I think from the get go she wasn't one of them, but hey you could have at least waited more than a few days for her tet uet up with a guy. Anyway, the fact of the matter is that I hope your other stories are not as misleading as this one was. Also, if you haven't already done so please change your summary in which you state that this was a Kagome and Sesshoumaru pairing when in fact it wasn't. Thanks once again for storstory. It was entertaining to read at first, but the constant victimization and demoralization of one of my favorite female characters has kinda dampen my mood. On a side note, you should worry more about what is happening around the character(s) rather than what they wear. Who wants to know if they're wearing designer clothes or driving the top of the model cars? I don't.

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Actually I'm just happy it ended. *makes mental note never to read anything with your name attached again*

This wasn't a Sess/Kag story.. this was a lets warp Sesshoumaru's character, bebase Kagome so that she may find "love" with some random man story.

All in all their wardrobes were more developed than the characters.

Why did Sesshoumaru turn from a "nice" guy to a serial rapist. Why did Inuyasha turn from a nice guy to a letch. Kouga and Kikyou? IT's not not final pairings that are the problem.. but that their romances weren't developed. Bah

phew....what a soap opera you had going there...lol. I'm glad everyone is happy and healthy though...great ending.

I'm loving your new fic about Kagome astudetudent and Sess as her teacher.

Good luck with all your fics, if this site doesn't knock me off again, I'll review your other stories as well.

Ja ne,
Gia

ummmm......the story was ok..i loved it until chapter 23 where she met kouga.....i was hoping that kagome would end up with sesshomaru or inuyasha...and im sry but i hated how kikyo got sesshomaru it just seemed a little unreal because sesshomaru claimed that they were though and it didnt make sense that he would go bak on his very word...but ne ways it was ok...i like how u kept us in suspense for soo long...u r a great writer and i hope to b able to read some more of your stories soon..also just wondering would u consider doing a alternate ending where sess or inu get kag....thanks again for writting this wonderful story...-Kaggurl

WHAT?! I thought you said this was a Sesshomaru/Kagome story! Not a Sesshomaru/Kikyo and Kagome/Koga story. I honestly didn't care for these past few chapters. I wanted Kagome and Sesshomaru to be together. Without him forcing himself upon her. I hope your other story doesn't turn out like this one had.

i cant i had forgotten about this story , adultfanfiction doesnt give updates emaitheythey sux!! anywayzzzzzzzzz i cant belive seshomaru is acting liek an asshole!!cant wait for the next chappie

Bah..Stop warping Sesshoumaru's character! Just admit this is an Inu/Kag romance and be done with it. *sigh* How disappointing.

I can't believe Sesshomaru forced himself on Kagome again! But I'm happy that Kagome finally had it with him and the way he treats her. Hopefully now she'll concentrate on herself and her baby girl.

I can't believes Sesshomaru! He says he loves her and wantsbe wbe with her, but he constantly treats her like a whore and rapes her! And InuYasha is no better either! He practically accused her of being a slut in the previous chapter. If I were Kagome, I wouldn't choose either brother. I would just want to get away from both of them and anything that reminded me of either of them. I sure hope she realizes how both brothers treat her and gain some self respect. And eventually leave both alone and find someone worth her love.

Oh man this story is turning out to be one hell of a soap opera. All you need now is for someone to get killed or commit suicide. Wouldn't that be interesting. Kagome slicing her wrists because of Sesshoumaru's abuse. Ah, maybe not. Anyway, thanks so much for updating. I'm so looking forward to more fabulous chapters from you. Ja.