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for Torn Between Two Brothers

by inuyashasgirl

person LaTisha
schedule December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! Finally one that is completely complete. I loved the you were able to wrap up everyone's parts to a mostly happy ending (Inuyasha is still alone). Keep up the great work!!
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good, but WHOA! Sensory overload much?! You use waaaaaaay too many adjectives! Yes, it is nice to be able to picture what is going on, but not to that extent!

Other than that, it was lovely.
person bitch
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ru retarded thats not a kag/sess fic thats a kag/koga and sess/kik fic u dame idot
person Dark Era
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just red Only Me and saw your name on the Reviw list I noticed that the athors name is missing to I red your some of your storys to an I like this one. I don't rilly like 3somes but this one I liked so If I liked this one and it is a 3some I would say you did a great job. Ignor the name Im not all that Dark or am I?

Hope you continyou on your storys

~___^
Dark Era
person DarkAngel
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well hey there long time no write. Sorry it took me so long i was in the middle of some stuff.But now i reveiw.I really l the the story. Lovely writen might i add.I do enjoy reading you stuff.Don't stop writing. I hope that everything is alright. E-mail me some itme ok.
Ja nee,
DarkAngel
person LcT
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i thought this story was.....okay? ...the lemon was nice hehe..perverted me. but then storywise, kagome did sound like a slut lol...no offense or anything. just saying..but i enjoyed readin. ^^. ^^
person sessaru
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hate the end !
infact i hate kikio!
and know i ask u why?
1st why is why sessy so wierd in the ending chs?
2nd why is why of all people kikio ?
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?
but a greate story none the less:)
person Anonymous
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no offense or anything, but that was the crapiest ending i have ever read. i thoughis his was a sess/kag fic, not a sess/kikyo fic! no offense but it sucked!
person Anonymous
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no offense or anything, but that was the crapiest ending i have ever read. i thought this was a sess/kag fic, not a sess/kikyo fic! no offense but it sucked!
person Anonymous
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noenseense or anything, but that was the crapiest ending i have ever read. i thought this was a sess/kag fic, not a sess/kikyo fic! no offense but it sucked!