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i really like this story, its so cute and adorable, yet has just the right amount ngstngst! its so fucking adorable, too! please update soon ^^

Wow, I really like where this story seems to be going :) You're a really good writier, anur dur doing a wonderful job. But I can't hope but worry that something bad is going to happy to Kagome, just the family problems and stuff, or maybe more. Please don't make me wait to long for another chapter! Keep up the updates!

This is a great story! I can't wait for the third chapter!

I hope you aren't mad at me for suggesting the disclaimer. I didn't mean you were stealing the characters it just keeps you safe from a entity otuside the fanfiction forum. I just wanted to mention to you. I think your story is great I apologiize if I offend you.

Well from what i have read chap. 1 and 2 i know this is gonna be a kick ass story :). and hey u have got Kagome comming from Kentucky, (kick butt that's where i live.) I can't wait to hear more i know i'm gonna be a long time fan of this story, i know u say there's dark parts in it, i wonder what it's gonna be? hmmmmmmm i can't wait to find out though, i can't wait till you update soon, i hope it's soon! your doing a great job so far keep up the great work :).

they were off to such a good start in your fic! so cute! inu so awkward! loved it ! but then you re read the beginning of the chapter (as I did, desperatly hoping that i didnt remember correctly) and something goes wrong!!!! OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean, something always goes wrong but its still upsetting. i must have mopre details. update asap!

Oooooooooooh... Write more! :D

An excellent start to your story but I do have a little advice for you first you need a disclaimer in a least one chapter letting people who the Inuyasha characters belong to. Please more soon of this promising story.