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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I like it a lot. The flow is good, there's a plot to the story and the characterizations are believable. I especially enjoyed the bath scene. I do hope this story has a happy ending, though. Angst is good, but it's the happy ending that makes it all worthwhile ^__^ Update soon--theMaven :)
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
got me hooked and waiting for more.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story! update soon! please!
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please..I can't have it end there..I need more.....do you even realize what you are doing to me?!?!?!? *breaths deeply into a brown paper bag*...I can't take this....I can't take this......How could you be so cruel?!??!?!?! *big puppy eyes*
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like your story, I like the way Rin is stubborn, and in love with Sesshomaru. But will Sesshomaru ever find out that it was Rin in the garden that watched his back, and he asked her to join him. Really nice story maybe some lemon contents in later chapters ok.
Cassie
Cassie
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! I'm ver much enjoying your writing. Do please continue with this story. The characters are very realistic, and it's nice that they're entirely in character (as opposed to some stories where they are not). I can't wait for whatever happens next!
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good. ::sighs:: more please?
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, im liking this. now, i must say, i almost went slightly nuts thinking that sess and rin wouldnt get together, that he would be too blind to see or didnt want to see, BUT i have every faith in u. dont play with my heart, i cant handle the rejection. onward to sess/rin babies!!
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhh... already I'm done with 4 chapters... I need more... ^_^
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. Really enjoy reading it. I love to read sesshonura and rini fics. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Please if you could e-mail me when you next update. Thanks. Until next time take care.