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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, very nice. i like that one better, but when u have them say something like "ill remember forever" it always makes me think, oh God, they're not going to get together. BUT i believe in u and trust u, so keep on! good information in the author's notes, especially about the fates and the chinese and all that. ur a very good informative writer, which adds a lot to the story.
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if I review too much...but I read ALOT of fic...and I just wanted to tell you how much I like this one..I've written a couple myself so I know how time consuming it can be...I'm dying for the next chapter...seriously...I could go at any minute...I'm not going to bed until the next chapter is published!...HURRY PLEASE!!!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's so beautiful!!! Please update soon.
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is I LOVE YOUR STORY, AND PLEASE LET US READ A LEMON I LOVE LEMINVOINVOLVING Sesshomaru and Rin. Please update soon Really Soon. Keep up the good work.
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great!
I really liked it.
hope It'll continue soon.
At the end Rin is a little to cold!
migi-chan
I really liked it.
hope It'll continue soon.
At the end Rin is a little to cold!
migi-chan
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries* you have to stop at the best places... now I won't be able to sleep tonight T_T... please write more, pleasssssssssse...
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my only comment for this chapter is sose ose yet so far. i feel sorry for rin. poor thing. she must be heart broken. i want to see how his cousin will anwser his questions. update soon.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just keeps getting interesting and looks like a twist is comming .
if Sesshoumaru see Rin without all her paint will he realize and put two and two together.
if Sesshoumaru see Rin without all her paint will he realize and put two and two together.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh crap, that wasnt a cousin/family blood "i love u cause ur family" i love u, was it? shes not ALLOWED to love sesshomaru like that. sigh...but i trust that in ur wonderful writing u'll let rin love sess and stay the hell away. *breathes deeply* ok, im good.......almost went crazy, but i believe in u!!! keep up the great work!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo....something in gonna happen next. i hope you will update soon! i do have a lil question. sessy has some kind of feelings for rin. so is he trying to replace her with this kitchen servant? i hope that question makes sense. well update soon!