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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait until your next update!
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can't have a GOOD Rin and Sess pairing without a little bit of angst. And, despite Rin's condi, th, things seem to be working out for the best. I commend you for writing in first person. It can be a slippery slope, but your quality hasn't gone down an inch. I'm anxious for the full-fledged happy ending that I believe is coming ^__^
So, show this to your muse, and tell her to get cranking ^__-
So, show this to your muse, and tell her to get cranking ^__-
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story. It is angsty (sorry about spelling!), but I think that just developes the characters and the emotions more. Only a really good writer and write such stories or fanfics. ^_^ Thanks for explaining that lemon in the hot springs. (I read it, and I was like, what the heck? Then she got raped and she was a virgin and I was even more confused!) So, that was like a mini fic within a fic, so to speak? Cool stuff. Great story. Update soon. (Please?)
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This dark twist in the story was so well written that although I liked the lemon (it was searing) if you had not written it, it would have been cool. I was so glad that Sesshoumaru put the business on that scum bab-but poor Rin! That beautiful, sweet girl! She did not deserve this but the world is a cruel place and that kind of thing does happen to people in reality. Please, keep writing. I hope she comes throuhg this horror stronger, and not broken.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Although I really hate it when things start to turn bad, it's the bad things that happen which makes the story interesting ^_^; interesting twist, sad, but interesting... I've been waiting sooooo long for you to update and you shoot me 3 chapters in one shot!!! luv ya! ^_^
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHHA that's funny! i enjoy the torture that Sesshoumaru did to that fucking bastard! That dumbass deserves it! Keep up your great job. Please email me when you update. Peach out!
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My, my that was a rough chaptTo bTo be brought back to life and tortured like that DAMN that was rough. Well you got me hooked you have to let me know when the next time you'll update. Here's my Email Ymanetta@hotmail.com Thanks
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if you were ever going to update again, lol. I'm so glad that you did. I would assume there's going to be no wedding with Toushi, now?
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it......your story has alot of emtions in it.......I love the part when Sesshoumaru took revenge on Lord Tergan...I love any word!!!!...the counting of how many time he brought him back to life ...beautiful....I wanted that bastard to died 100 time........I favorite line...."There's plenty of death to go around"( I hope I got that right.) that's was a good catch line......please update soon...if you can please email, when you are about to....Keep up with your writing......
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow it was worth the wait for the update for this story im somewhat speechless you had used tensiaga in a way i would imagine becuase sometimes i day dream about inuyasha and how the children of inu/kag, sees/rin and mir/san would fight some one like naraku and one of them would torture their enemies and wont let them die by using tensaiga until they got the right info i should really stop blabering sorry i just have great imagination thats all oh i wanted to ask you if rin and sess had sex before she was raped then why did she still had her hyme when she was raped mail ma when you update