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What a deeply embroiled plot you have weaved. You have got to finish this story! Keeping Sess in total character but allowing the readers to view his thoughts and self-reflection has endeared him further in my mind. Thank goodness that you've also had the foresight not to make Rin a wuzz. Sess needs someone to be impetuous as he is reserved, giving as he is stoic, loving as he is afraid to express that simple emotion. Great transition and the chapters are fluid as you move from one scene to another.

i love your story update!

love it please continur oh and e mail me asap i have some Q's
Ja

Wow, that was engrossing. I read all 15 posts in one sitting unable to tear myself away. Very good. Great job.

Update Update Update soon please

*Sobs uncontrollably* Poor, poor, poor Rin! Naughty author!! All I can say is that this bloody well better bring Sess and Rin together because if not I'm setting my Muse on your Muse. *growling in backund*und* Not yet luv your time will come *says placatingly* lol! OK so maybe not but still... To have been Sess when thoroughly dismembering Targen...now that was a truly pricelss piece of genius if I've ever read it, you know I can't say I've read a fic where Tensaiga was put to that sort of use. It's refreshing to have some fresh meat *coughs* in there. ;P Anywho, can't wait until the next chappie mate!!
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Maggz XD

The direction you are going in is well mapped out. I would love to see what happens when the hunt for the traitor's ensues! Not to mention what happens when Rin has to heal and how will she change.

Sess' cousin has a fiance? Will he be in the story? And he's an inu youkai! Hisai is and excellent focal point for certain aspect of the plot development and the twists. She brings the "threads" together if you will. Keep up the excellent work. I am looking forward to more of this story.

that with the virgin was even written.

all right you managed to get me confused., maybe you should explain a bit better who sesshou's cousin really is.
I realised that she ain't normal when she looked into the future while she was playing with the strings.
but I doubt that everone got the significance of the moment.

by the way... why the hell do most of the authors think that Rin is the best chara for getting raped?

migi-chan

i actually love the angst in this story. it adds dramatic flare. can't wait until the next chapter. i'm defiantly a fan of the story. keep up the good job.

another chapter well done dude! Great job. Update soon. =)