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for Red Strings of Fate

by northstar

person tomoe
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was so good. You are really a good writer, I hope you complete all your wonderful fics and continue to grace this fandom with your writing. God knows it needs it.
person silvia
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it finsh fast i loved it so much
person babe_galanime
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue plz.
person JudoCreature
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... I'm not sure if you know this... but Inukuso means Dog shit. (Inu= dog, kuso= shit) I earned a giggle from me if nothing more. I love your story by the way, but I think Sesshy-kun might have gone just a ~little~ overboard with the killing Tergen thing... And I don't think he would do that... A bit OOC but amusing nonetheless. ^.^! Great Job! --Judo
person Kayla
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a really good story. Please update as soon as possible!
person Ren
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, enjoyed the story, you kept the main characters in well...very impressive on my part, and also wanted to compliment you on your good use of vocabulary and gramar. I am thoroughly impress and would appreciate it very much if you will update again sometime soon. I want to know what will become of Sesshoumaru and Rin...Tee hee hee, keep up your great work too ^_^ arigato for the story, please update soon again, matta ne!
person Devon M
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is damn.
person Mmoirai
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My heart aches with anticipation! You are a very talented writer. I like the first person narative. It drew me in and I lost myself for two unaware hours enjoying the twists and turns! I love Red Strings of Fate and wait with baited breath for your next chapter!
person jem
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dang... Im officially HOOKED!!! Update soon!!! PLEASE?
person DPM
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an exceptionally well written story. You've kept the integrity of the characters of Sess and Rin. (Good that Rin was not too much of a pushover!) I can't stand wimpiness in girls. We are as good as the next guy if not better ;-). Sess is such dark, unfathomable person. He doesn't even realize what he feels at times. You took the time to really allow him to dissect and analyze his emotions toward Rin. I could literally "see" the cogs of brain working out the intricacies/comlexities of why he feels what he feels despite his utmost resistance to admit he loves the girl. Men are kind of foolish in that regard, aren't they ?!?!

Please update. I would love to see what happens next.