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by Atropa

person sparkmaster
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for Giving us five more wonderful chapters Yay Shippo is here I can't wait to see how many other characters you will bring into the story I would Love to see Miroku & Sango and a little Sesshomaru wouldn't hurt either.
person Venus
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So The thunder brothers killed Shippo family I really hope Inu kicks the crap out of them since Shippo is now is pup. I hope we see a Cold Demon Lord maybe he can make up to his brother and be allies. Update More
person Papa Smurf
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The mark I wonder how Kouga will take it knowing a Inu Hanyou has taken Ayame away from him.
person Albino Elf
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A rosary from Ayame Intersting I just hope Inuyasha doesn't abuse is to much. I mean would a woman really love a man who can control you with a set of prayer beads but if it was Inuyasha I guess I could live with it.
person Ickabod119
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now the fun really begins I can't wait to see what else you have planned for this story your writing has made this pairing quite believable I never thought it could work so I must praise you and your story. Please post more of this story soon!!!
person Zelix
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, now it really begins eh? I'm looking forward for more. Oh yeah, in case you haven't checked yet, i sent a story to you over email, don't let it's title disturb you... it's nothing sick like that, it's just a title.
person Smack
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow Ayame gets the rosary now that is a great twist to the story I just what is keeping her from jumping Inuyasha bones I would if I were put in that situation. GREAT STORY.
person Cold Demon Lord
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AW! Inuyasha has his little own pack, a mate and a cub isn't so quite I really love the rosary idea what a cool twist to the story now I will wait on pins and needles for some chapters thank you for making an intersting story I find it quite orignal.
person Wolf Demon
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I bet Kouga is going to be totally pissed that a Inu-Hanyou has mark a beauiful wolf demon like Ayame. I hope there will be some fight scenes between the two cause there is nothing like a good Inuyasha & Kouga fight over a girl. Cool Story!
person InuYashasGirl
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great part.