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for Set me free

by Atropa

person Pyro
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never seen this couple, but they are an interesting mix. Now with shippo there, it should be even more interestin. A wolf, Inu-Hanyo, and a fox, hmmm
person InuYashasGirl
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ayame being the one to sit was cute, and so is shippo, can't wait for more.
person AngelBaby
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue
person Zelix
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, annother VERY original twist, i love it.
person InuYashasGirl
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me thinks I know why InuYasha won't let her go
person Chibi Usa
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glade to see your still writing, I loved both parts, hurry back with part 3
person Gothika
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue
person Zelix
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good start, as usual you're pairings are intriquing and original.. hope you write more soon because i'm all for this now.
person Tom
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intrigueing. You earn a Semper Fidelis. I don't give those lightly.

P.S. Yes I'm a Marine.
person Tom
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do intend to use Miroku and Sango plus shippo and Kirrara? Your story has already as it is writen ensures no Kagome unless she arrives by another way.
Semper Vigilant