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by Atropa

person AntiAntiKagome
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU ANTI KAGOME PPL MUST DIE!
person The Written World
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have reached a certain part of your fic here. Chapter 11 I believe. A few things have me concerned. One, though I like your basic plot, the editor in me asks that I make some friendly suggestions. Your writng style was a little flat. The characters which you were writing about seemed a little flat. I suggest you go back and reread a bit of your own writing. Though I do enjoy the writing stlye from which you have approached this work. Continue. And hopefully I'll see more of your skills at large.
person Blue
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Cool plot and excellent lemons... Keep up the good work...
person Backlash Wave
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really are my favorite author. I just love you so much. How in the blue hell do you come up with this stuff. Do you know what I love most about you, the pairings. They are just..... WOW anything with Inuyasha and someone other than Kagome and I will F***ING love it. And that is mostly what you write. This has been your loyal servant Backlash Wave.
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story it was really good ^_^
person Atropa\'s #1 fan
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've just read this fic again and maybe its just me but....this fic just gets better the more you read it! this has got to be your best work on AFF. You should post it on Trollmia if you havent already!
person Atropa\'s #1 fan (i wish :p)
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've said it b4 and i'll say it again. you NEED to write more Ayame/ Inu fics! you seem to be one of the only people on any site to be doing them! all the people are doing (besides you of course) are choosing the predicable ones like inu/kag. they've got no originality. thats y i think you r the best author on this site. o and keep up the good work!
person Tom
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Semper Fidelis
person InuYashasGirl
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't forget your still writing this one now sweetie.
person Koori
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so good and sexy at the same time but why Kouga had to get his ass kicked(likes him)but that was funny though.