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for Serendipity

by Kura

person Chris
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have a great writing style, keep it up.
person Julie
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Wow this story of yours (Serendipity) sounds really interresting, only one problem with it so far...there aren't enough of it ;) but I guesat wat will come with time.
One thing I would really like though is that you make some kind of line when shifting from story to the "intro comment" and "outro comments". That would make it a bit easiere to figure out I think, and then I wont think there is still lots to read only to find out the many lines are comments :).
Can I get a mail perhaps when you upload the next chapter? and when will that be?

Great work so far


- Julie