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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it was just getting good. Why did u stop? 'tear' UPDATE SOON
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hellaz nice fic...too bad it ain't kagome/sesshoumaru -.-|
lol....kagome and sesshoumaru rock as a couple but i guess inu-yasha and kagome will do in this fic =P keep it up and update soon! thnx and ja ne!
lol....kagome and sesshoumaru rock as a couple but i guess inu-yasha and kagome will do in this fic =P keep it up and update soon! thnx and ja ne!
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very origanal interesting story, I hope to see more in the future. ^_~
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i read the summary of this fic and thought "hell, this looks really familar," then I read the first chapter and understood why. I have seen this story before, with the same exact scenario, the same exact "green liquid" only it was more fluent and be wri written. it also happened to be posted on this site a LONG time ago. I know this is not a origific,fic, I also know that it is not right to plagirize someones writing. THEY put the effort into creating a story, with a plot they created, to take that away and put your name on it is wrong. Its so wrong that I am not even going to read the rest of this damn fic, because the original was better and this abriged version sucks. You ruined it. I suggest you take this down, or rewrite it so that you do not so OBVIOUSLY steal the plot from another fic. God, the sex scene was even the same, only you took parts out and made it shitty. Get and imagination, get some creativity, do not steal stories from other people. IT IS WRONG. You should be ashamed. And you better hope to god that the REAL author of this fanfic does not find out you plagirized their fanfic. They dont take too kindly to that.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
horny... that's an understatement... good, i like it.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY KAGOME-CHAN IS DOING MY JOB!!! ^_^ oh well... I like this chapter I really hope you update soon
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your fic is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! but please can you make the next chapter longer? i luv it so far...write more soon!
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool, kagome should only belong to inuyasha forever. Great story i loved it.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very good! Loved it, I hope you can update soon!
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kayaa! Wonderfull story! Heh heh heh...im egar to find out if my favortie Yash-chan makes Kag's his own....muwhahaahaha...i just love a posesive hanyou.