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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was simply great!
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Everything you write is great. I hope that you come up with something else again soon.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was really sweet...violent, full of swearing, but really sweet! I loved it! Great job! ^__^
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was hysterical!!!!! loved it! yay for you! my particular fav part was catching the bullets w/ his teeth- that is inuyasha in the modern era in a nutshell! great adn wonderful! update soon! and BTB, i agree with you, eri is the only intelligent one in kagome's friends
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Inuyasha!! kick some bad guy b! ^! ^_^ love the dichotomy of Inu's personality--tough guy extraordinaire, but SO incredibly sweet and caring with Kagome--just absolutely LOVE it!!! *sigh*---will there be more?? *hint*hint*
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story... it's a great slice of life story, and I love how through the beginning, Kagome isn't scared at all, the only thing she worries about is getting out before Inuyasha hears about this! :D
Very enjoyable, and even though I really like it, I hope you don't try to expand. It's perfect as it is.
Take care and keep writing.
Very enjoyable, and even though I really like it, I hope you don't try to expand. It's perfect as it is.
Take care and keep writing.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love how you portrayed Inuyasha and Kagome. It felt very in character. I love it when Inuyasha acts like a badass too :D That catching bullets with his teeth stuff was brilliant! If there is a continuation I will be first in line to read it.
/Shjo
/Shjo
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actualy Inu Yasha would say son of a whore, he is a dog.
Needs more chapters
Needs more chapters
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I hope there is more to come! This could be a very good fic in my opinion. Anyhoo, nice.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh one more thing a bullet at the ranges your impling travel at 2,467 feet per second, so Inu Yasha would not be able to catch them with his teeth. I'll let that slide.