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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good chappys!!* i love the whole idea with sesshy reading all about rin...i wounder how he is going to get her to have some"fun " with him *smirks* keep it up i love it so far!!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its kind of scary to have the person you are dating to have all kind of information on you. it reminds me of a stalkerwondwonder why sesshoumaru is gathering information about rin. well update soon.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read about the big night. Rin is being swept off her feet ,lucky girl.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooo jealous! I want to be Rin! Love this story anyway. Somehow I missed chapter 5 and was lost for a moment, then had to go back and noticed you snuck a chapter up on me. I don't care, I understood what was going on in that 5th one. Can't wait for the next.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*smirks* great chapy ant ant wait to read more ^.^ ja for now ^,^
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it ^_^ Is there anything sexier than a man who knows how to take control of a situation? I think not. What a great first date! . . . But, I do find it a little hard to believe that Rin's 25, and she's never gotten "excited" before (the wetness between her thighs in ch 5). I mean, that sort of thing first normally happens during adolescence due to hormone changes. There doesn't neceily ily have to be a stimulus, it just happens. It's a natural part of your body's growth and development . . . But, anyway, I do like how Sess and Rin interact with one another. They play so well off one another--his elegant ease and her awkwardness and anxiety . . . And, oh, I do have one more question. In ch 4, Kagome and InuYasha start talking after a "heaboutbout of lovemaking," but in ch 5, it's inferred that they haven't been sexually intimate with each other yet . . . So, which is it? It's just a small question. But, I DO love what you're doing with the characters ^_^ Just watch out for the occasional misspelling or typo--theMaven :)
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh i love your ficky!!!*smirks* i cant wait to read more it is really good and i love how you keep the chara's just like they are ^.^... i love the mirkou and sango getting married an dthe inuyasha and sesshy fightin..PL..PLZZ write more ^.^
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, I like. I like very much. Great JOb Girly cant wait to read more of your wonderful fic. HUGGLES ^____^
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! I loved that he didn't just 'go along with the crowd'. I loved that he said that it was 'his date'. He was totally swept away with her! Good job and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter ^_^
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is just so cute! i love it! i love how you portray rin in your story so far. she is mature but yet still have some child-like qualities in her also. i thought it was hilarious how miroku propose to sango while they're having sex. that isn't how i would imagine a girl get propose to. thank you for updating so soon and hope the next time you update it will be just as fast.