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Good chapter! I love it cant wit to read more. Keep up the good work.

hahahah....you make it seem like seehoumaur is a loser and cant get himself amate or something. but we all know that isn't that case. thats cute how rin was embrassed and couldn't tell kagome that she was mated to sesshoumaru. good chapter. update soon.

I think it was great to add the parents,should be a good extra element to your story.

I'm in love with this story its the cutest! Please keep it up as you have been doing. You are one of the stories that brighten my day.(Yes I check stories daily on my cool down time.) Keep it up and keep being so good!

Whoa !! some good stuff there.
Sesshoumaru taking charge wonder how the others will react.

i was expecting like an update tomorrow or something and boom here you are updating with more than one chapter. for some reason reading this chapter reminds me of the song lyrics from the song yeah by usher...where ludacris raps...lady on the street but freak in bed. off i go to read your other chapters. =]

i think you should give rin some backbone. i know she loves sessy but she can't have him controling her like that. being protective is a whole lot different than being like sessy. its scary...he is controlling her whole life now. well that ust ust my opinion but hey it is your story so youc an write whatever you want. i did enjoy the chapter though. since rin was in heat does that mean that she will be pregnant soon? well see you again once you update the story.

Just wanted to let you know I'm still loving your story. I could just imagine the look on their faces (especially Sess's when he saw her). You bring up some interesting recollections over what he's done in the past to show how cold hearted he had been and how open he's been for Rin. So far that I get from the story, Sess really is falling for her hard and fast. But it leaves for two kinds of wondering. One) you mentioned about him meeting this other girl at a bar. They met, went to a motel, screwed, it was over, yet you also mentioned it lasted a few weeks in which he would call her up and she'd come over and then once he tired of her threw her out like trash. s kis kind of a little like Rin. It was just a date, then he takes her off with him, and now they're going to jump into bed, will the week spent be enough to quill his want and despose of her as well, even though he knows all the upset he would get from InuYasha, Kagome, and Sango. I don't REALLY see that happening but it's one thought. The other was of Sess really fallen for Rin and then something -- I don't know what it would be because Rin is always a charactor to be for him -- and (it doesn't have to be an actual thing, but) he comes to know just what kind of pain he had inflicted on women of the past for being such an Ice King. I know there's got to be something coming, because he copied out that picture of her. There's always something that happens you there's pictures. One question: The girl he threw out, which InuYasha loved. Was that Kikyo, or just some nameless person that unimportant to the story? Just wondering. He's with Kagome now, and it just doesn't seem like the girl would be her, and Kikyo is the only other girl InuYasha loved before.

Kept going its going good.

aawww *sniffles* Just when is is getting juicy!!*begs* write more plz!!! anyways...GREAT chappy i love it ....*sighs* even the cliffy..i hate them at times but you cant have a good story with out a Few good cliffys! so i cant always hate them and i agree a whole chappy ish better for her first time ^.^ i gots a questions is shippho living with kagome or is he just non existant in the story?....same for kirara... cuz in they show where ever kagome and sango are ..those two usually follow ...^.^ keep up the Great work ja ne for now * rin-chan out!*