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for The day You Went Away

by lirimear

person Mika
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay Kikyo bashing!!!! It was good but a little hard to follow.
person Kellie
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its ok, but I had a hard time reading it. It does sound like a good story, but you might want to go into more detail of the story.